Reviews for Death by Swan
kmfroggi chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
This was by far the funniest thing I've read in a while! I was literally laughing so damn out out loud! Thanks for writing and sharing!
Honeymoon Edward chapter 1 . 4/27/2018
I think this is the first story I’ve ever read in which Edward expels gas. I really enjoyed this one; I do love I funny story. Good luck.
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 1 . 4/27/2018
Loved it!
Elise de Sallier chapter 1 . 4/27/2018
A fun, well written story. Thank you!
gabby1017 chapter 1 . 4/26/2018
This was hyaterical... I was doubled over in laughter... Awwww, I loved this story... spoken to the last word!
YourVixen chapter 1 . 4/26/2018
Loved this!
lelu chapter 1 . 4/25/2018
How are Jasper and Mike? Poor guys were felled by Edward's aroma! A second chapter please! Maybe Jasper and Alice's wedding, now? He might end up being allergic to a kiwi smoothie!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2018
Oh...poor Edward. This is one of those things he'll never live down. lol
dc chapter 1 . 4/21/2018
so funnnnnny. cried while laughing. thanks for your words.
Taylor9901 chapter 1 . 4/22/2018
Omg. Best one. I absolutely love it. I need more please.
Raindrop0620 chapter 1 . 4/22/2018
Omg! Best “forbidden fruit” story ever. I couldn’t stop laughing.
my2galspal chapter 1 . 4/21/2018
That was definitely an original take on the “forbidden fruit” idea. Loved it.

Thanks for sharing your story and best of luck in the contest.
midnitereader chapter 1 . 4/21/2018
That is too funny. Poor Edward. I'm surprised he was able to hold it in during the ceremony. Shame Emmett didn't want to see his baby sister was all grown up.
sherylb chapter 1 . 4/20/2018
That was so funny!
fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 4/20/2018
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