not gona lie, thank you for making this story. This is what first showed me ffn for the first time as i found it on youtube. Read out by a tts, and i enjoyed hearing your story. I'm hoping to see you complete the re-write eventually
side not im like 80% sure, this good ass shit me crying

You put your story down, but it wasn't that bad. I did like the part of Issei and Yuma falling in love and she eventually became an angle with silver wings. I liked how deeply they fell in love and the inner action between those two. That part was good. I did not like Matusda at all.
I would like to have seen more of Issei training and more about his powers. Nothing was mentioned about the ring he acquired. That would have been an interesting story about that.

amigo yo sinceramente lei tu historia . pero en el momento en que le diste relevancia a Matsuda para mi fue como premiarlo por todo lo malo que hizo. y mas al darle una ama tan amable como Rias. lo siento, pero no puedo ver a Rias con nadie mas que con issei... podrias por lo menos en la reescritura que ella se muestre mas interesada en reencarnarlo y hacerlo su fiel siervo?

Damn Bartholomew holy shit I’m so sorry

Good luck with the rewrite - if you read the manga Raynare ( awful translation - the original Raynelle was a bit nearer but Reinel is an actually angelic name ) is much more like a cult kid who just doesn't know better than shitty pastiche villain. I had several theories on how falling gives angels brain damage, effectively, but there's also their innate lack of independence as angels to consider anyway. Theg can still draw on angelic magic too, so they must still have *some* connection to Heaven.

( Akeno should probably have exploded when Rias reincarnated her... )

I can't wait to see this rewritten I thought it was still good. And I hope you get better, and ill be waiting for your updates I would hate to see a good writer go away. Stay safe and keep moving forward from a loving reader.

Good to have you back! I honestly smiled so wide when I saw this update saying one of my first ever and favourite stories was getting a rewrite :)

Good luck!

No idea what kind of life you lead and from what I've read it is shitty. But good for you. Hope you can make it better. I never touched this story because the first few chapters made me not caring.

Heck, I only put this story on my reading list because I am waiting for this

This story is genuine trash but your skills is undeniable. So, thank you for doing this. Hope to see more.

At least Panther-Strife is honest, more than I can say for a coward who kicked me out of your discord server for no reason whatsoever.

Please don't trust this man, his story might be good but this might as well be Crack story.

Ignore the Panther-Strife guy beneath this review. If you want to know why he was removed, take a look at his profile - you'll understand.

Don't trust this writer, he kicks people out of his discord server for no reason whatsoever!

Could you also explore why would Raynare want to be loved from the canon?

man it the feeling of looking back and seeing your old work and cringing at it really sucks doesnt it? i do ut all the time. xD

WHOOOOOOOOOO! This was oen of my tops favorite books! And finally you will focus on this rewriting book! i was depressed when i saw discontinued