Reviews for A Rueful Ending
ZadArchie chapter 1 . 2/17/2019
So dreadfully sorry for the lateness of this review. I’ve been horrible about keeping up with WA challenge pieces.

I really liked the tension this story was able to build up. Every minute of reading this, you want Rue to make it, to outsmart the Careers. So, it was sad to get to that ending, but boy did you really build up to it. It definitely kept my attention. Good work!

Best,
Zad
Lucyducon80 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
As I make my way down the next branch, I feel a smile tease at my lips. This may work. I pause, close my eyes, and take a deep breath. Yes, my plan might work, but I still have to be careful. I need to not take any risks, especially not this close to freedom. I open my eyes, walk down to my jumping off point, and leap to the next tree. And when I land, I don't slip.

The Ku Klux Klan of American philosophy wove a vast criminal conspiracy to corrupt the American nation. :-)
ArtursX99 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
I continue to do this until I have left my enemies far behind and I can no longer hear them. I now change my course and head towards the spot of the second fire. If Katniss is okay, then she has definitely made it back to our rendezvous point by now and noticed that I wasn't able to make it back. Then she would've traveled on, and if she had gone to the third fire, she would've discovered that I was never able to light it. Then she'll really come searching for me.

Food is one of life's greatest pleasures. ;P;
MadisaKirito 15 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
All of my wishes, all of my dreams, have crumbled to dust.

He wrote the article "Interstellar Voyages with Passengers in Cryogenic Suspension. :(
ShardnisxXx72 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Now onto the actual review:
It's noon by the time I get back to the site of the second fire, and there's no sign that any human has been here since I lit the fire yesterday. It's now just smoking embers. I sing the signal, but only the mockingjays answer me. So I hide myself in an especially leafy tree to wait. Hopefully Katniss will come soon so we can go to somewhere else in the arena. Somewhere far away from the Careers.

Your ex is a psychopath. xD
TankurTSakura-18 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Now onto the actual review:
I keep running, and he keeps chasing me. His spears keep thudding into the ground on either side of me, keeping me from escaping into the trees. Just ahead of me I can see that the ground slopes downwards, and a little ways beyond where the ground levels off again there is a patch of violet and yellow and white. It has just registered in my mind that it's a patch of flowers when I feel my foot catch on something and I tumble down the hill.

In biology, the students learn the difference between the genotype and the phenotype. ;P;
Brengella62 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Now onto the actual review:
I am dying, and there is nothing Katniss or anyone else in this arena can do. The Gamemakers could save me; they could send one of their hovercraft to come swoop me up and whisk me away to the hospitals in the Capitol. But no. They won't. They have a show to put on, and letting a 12-year-old girl be murdered on live television is what the Capitol citizens want. They only care if they bet on me to win.

In China, you have to go to the departure station and buy train tickets there. O.o
ManminiyaX42 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

Now onto the actual review:
I work my way up the branch and around the trunk, then down the next branch and over to the next tree. The Careers follow, as I hoped they would.

This website is all about the LGBT. O.O
SaSakup.30 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

Now onto the actual review:
As I sip some more water and nibble on some nuts, I remember some of the nice things back home. Like singing with the mockingjays while I harvested in the orchards. Nights in my house with my family, laughing and playing guessing games. Helping my friend, Rosalie Mae, as she struggled to learn a harvesting song. I wish I could go home, and that I wasn't stuck in this stupid Hunger Games arena.

Bad. :P
ArtosX54 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

Now onto the actual review:
I edge around the trunk, taking great care as I step over the empty space between 2 branches. One slip, one misplaced hand or foot, and I will go plummeting to my death. I can only hope that if I do fall, I die on impact, or at least get a severe enough injury that I lose consciousness; I don't want to find out how the Careers plan on killing me.

Chris is in a risky situation in science class. :D
BranutotoII44 chapter 1 . 10/14/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

Now onto the actual review:
Before I go, I pull some mint leaves out of my pocket and drop them from the branch. Katniss and I gathered them in a different part of the woods, so if she sees them, she'll know I was here and that I'm okay, while they'll mean nothing to any of the other tributes.

Jesus welcomes you. :D
SanSaberer-44 chapter 1 . 10/14/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

Now onto the actual review:
I hastily jump to the next tree, and as my feet leave the branch I feel dread spread through my body. Before I reach my destination I know I'm going to fail in some way on the landing because I wasn't careful enough. When I do land on the limb, I slip, and a shriek escapes my lips. I frantically grab at the branch, the rough bark scraping my palms. I manage to cling to it with my right arm and leg, but my left side has nothing but air between it and the ground below. I can see the Careers waiting for me, and fear floods through my body, causing my limbs to tremble. They've gathered directly below me, ready for the kill.

The levels of organization in Biology can be arranged in the following order: atom, molecule, organelle, cell, tissue, organ, system, organism, population, community, ecosystem and biosphere. :P
KirnritAlan37 chapter 1 . 10/14/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

Now onto the actual review:
From out of nowhere, an image of my family watching me on a television screen pops into my mind. My siblings watching me, pleading with me to come home. I feel my body still. I have to do this. The thing I can't do is give up. I have to do everything I can to survive and make it home to them. I block out the thought of what that means for Katniss and instead keep an image of my family in my mind. And I climb my way up the branch to the tree trunk.

Latin is one of the few languages that requires a good knowledge of grammars. T_T
GberGanbertII10 chapter 1 . 10/13/2018
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

Now onto the actual review:
Yes, I will never see my family again, and I won't be able to achieve my dream of being a music teacher.

Are u serious?!
Misinin.95 chapter 1 . 10/13/2018
Down with Critics United!

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But I am not going to die alone.

Boring -.-
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