I'm rereading the story, and I'd forgotten about this line:

"That arsehole looks like a scowling caveman trying to figure out how to rub sticks together to start a fire."

It's a great insult and it made me laugh all over again.

I can't disagree with Harry, it must be hard to be a werewolf but it is not an absolute excuse, he was willing to abandon his wife and newborn child in the middle of an all-out war, that's not heroism or bravery, that's just sheer cowardice and a runaway of your responsibilities. Sirius is a bit like that as well, his main priority should had been Harry safety instead to pursuit Peter in revenge but at least it's more understandable since he was not on his right of mind due to the shock of his best friend dead and betrayal of the other one.

I still can't believe Harry named one of his sons Severus, the man could be a war hero but he was a shit teacher and person in general that hated Harry and made his life the most miserable possible, just remind on the third book when he clearly saw Peter was alive and there was a chance that Sirius was innocent but he still wanted him to get kissed by dementors and was maniacal angry when he escaped.

I'm glad you didn't bash Ron, his reaction was natural of his character but he didn't over react.

Malfoy was never evil in canon, yes he was an arrogant racist prat but he never did something nefarious, only in book 6 onward and we all know how that affected him and his personality, he isn't evil by nature.

Snape is just a child inside an adult body that never got over a teenager's grudge, there is no excuse to bully an eleven year old orphan that never met his parents just because he look like his father.

This was a nice story. I do wonder why 95% of all guys had to be evil, stupid, perverted or all of the above, but aside from that minor critique, I really enjoyed reading this.

WHAT no threesome with Luna, you lousy fuck hahaha

I would (happily) sacrifice a few souls to see Michael Jackson in concert so, vibe.

FINALLY! some one calls out Snape and Dumbles on their BS.

And a fitting end to Riddle too. For once, no flashy duels, almost no monologuing, no persevering through injuries. Almost clinical execution instead.

Wow. Amazing way to handle Dumbdumb. Truly poetic. I tip my hat to you, this is a fitting choice.

Oh, this is so fucking better done than canon DOM battle. No offence to JKR, but bunch of hardened death eaters with years of fighting experience and knowledge of dark arts bitch slapping away some underaged students around without inflicting serious casualties just doesn't make sense.

Oh, I expected Xeno to be the target but I also assumed it would be after the scandalous interview. Although grab and apparate is a viable tactic which would be better utilised in Year Four instead of that portkeyed cup.

Satisfying action scene but not a big fucking surprise that it happened, it was bound to happen sooner or later with the administration ignoring this problem. I can bet some galleons some of the 200s had dark mark.
Basically the same situation as with the ministry eyes shut but on smaller scale. Still, shieeeet.