|Reviews for We're In This Together|
| Hank1967 chapter 35 . 6h
Ooo - now that is scary! Just thinking of what Pansy might have in mind for the Dursleys makes me cringe in anticipation. Go Pansy! Love the bit with Neville. Now, will Hermione just come around? The past two chapters have been great! I'm looking forward to more!
| Concolor44 chapter 35 . 18h
Ahh. I've been wondering when the Dursleys would show up again. Heh heh heh.
Harry and Pansy go at it just about as often as they can, lucky things. Oh, for teenage stamina!
Okay, as we've discussed to some degree, you've got me well and truly hooked on this story. Following. I don't want to miss any updates.
| phhsdj chapter 24 . 10/14
I love this pursy words to his parents Were great and Harry’s words were touching. I do think you missed an opportunity To get harry and her a new ally With Professor Lupin But hey I am sure you are not going to push all their Tencha allies Away.
| Concolor44 chapter 31 . 10/14
Holy. F*cking. Sh*t.
Pansy's just FULL of surprises, ain't she? That gambit certainly surprised me.
Good on Narcissa, though. She was YEARS overdue for that.
| phhsdj chapter 20 . 10/14
I love the story even the small sex scene was good. Also your writing is great and really wet out together. Your really good at describing what the characters are seeing. You also make it so they don’t know the answer to everything. It is very easy with Harry Potter fanfic to make them know how to fix everything so I am ready glad you are not doing that. I mean it’s ok for them to find something actually that is the best way to do it. Lastly I really hope she does not push Hermione away from harry to. Like rim I get he does not really help harry and is always going off about her. However Hermione is really really useful to harry and her and as she said he really care about her. She already knows Hermione is not interested in him romanticly and they kinda even get alone. Please i am not trying to tell you what to do I just want you to know that unless you do it right having pursy get rid of Hermione will turn her from a Character character I like to one who is just manipulating Harry
| Chraisy chapter 35 . 10/14
Absolutely loved it. The fact that this is my 3rd review in all the thousand of stories should show that...
Please... please... please...
Make Harry torture and kill Peter, don’t make Sirius a villian, but don’t make him as much of an idiot as canon Sirius seems to be...
And please... please... please...
Go down the road that Pansy was exited when Harry was with Narcisa, but didn’t like the toe thing, and make this a harem story... or at least Harry/Multi. I would love to see Fleur and Tonks there, and Narcisa as a consort or something like that at least. Probably Daphne as well...
Hope you do go that way and would love it if other people thought that way. Based on one of your previous author notes I guess you might agree, which I hope and hope and hope again that will happen. You might do it during 4 year (Fleur), and fifth (Tonks and Fleur from the order of the fried chicken, whose headquarters should absolutely NOT be Nr 12. It was a stupid part of cannon.
Can’t wait for updates
| Concolor44 chapter 30 . 10/14
You know, one interesting - and rather sad - thing I've observed is that many, many men do not understand how to give a woman an orgasm, much less several (nor do some of them even care). And it is SUCH A RUSH to watch your girl come unglued for the fifteenth or twentieth time! Harry certainly has the right ideas, as Pansy has learned to her delight.
| phhsdj chapter 19 . 10/13
Before I even read this chapter I want to make one thing clear. I don’t care what you think is good it not good about the books. It’s getting tiring Hearing you say what you don’t like with Books. It makes you seem like you don’t actually like the books. I don’t read your story for you opinion I read it for gkjt great story and even better writing. Please don’t take this the wrong way I understand you want to explain things I just feel like you should write those opinions with a better tone because to me they come off as you saying you no better then jK. Again sorry if this comes off the wrong way.
| Concolor44 chapter 27 . 10/13
I love your references to the Department of Terrible Ideas. Really, it sounds plausible, as often as the Ministry does Intensely Stupid Things.
I wonder if Harry and Dobby could possibly prove Lord Parkinson murdered his wife. Not that the Wizengamot would care about Leddy, but murder is murder, you know?
| Concolor44 chapter 22 . 10/13
YES! RON & HERMIONE WOULD MAKE A TERRIBLE COUPLE!
Thank you for explicitly stating that.
OH, uff. Poor Remus. That had to hurt worse than the transformation.
| Concolor44 chapter 20 . 10/12
"Best of three."
| Concolor44 chapter 18 . 10/12
That line where Harry wondered about whether wizards got diabetes was HILARIOUS!
| nkh1 chapter 35 . 10/12
| QueenLinear chapter 35 . 10/12
oh I'm curious to see what the idea is!
| Souen11 chapter 35 . 10/11
I look forward to seeing what you have planned for the Dursleys. :)