Reviews for We're In This Together |
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HalfBlood Prince chapter 23 . 2/15/2023 Great Chapter! :D I'm totally satisfied with the sacrifice of the virgirn... Keep going with the LEMON scenes. |
HalfBlood Prince chapter 22 . 2/15/2023 I love this seductive Harry :D LOL |
HalfBlood Prince chapter 20 . 2/15/2023 Yes! LEMON! :D |
Ruairi J.L chapter 55 . 2/13/2023 I haven't reviewed since my initial thoughts on your foreword, but I can't contain myself any longer. That last segment was absolutely fucking hilarious and I need to show some appreciation. I understand it's probably supposed to be disturbing, but I have a sense of humour so dark that it rivals that of your Harry and Pansy, and the description of Rita's corpse genuinely made me laugh out loud. With that, and some of the other lines in this story in mind (my other favourite being Harry thinking about his sex life in comparison to Dobby's coffee habit), I have to say that you could write a great black comedy fic if you ever wanted to. As you can likely tell from how far I've gotten in a scant few days, I'm seriously enjoying the story. It's such a refreshing take on character development and nuance that I'll be disappointed when I try to find new stories in future and inevitably compare their characters to yours; for me, you've raised the bar with Harry and Pansy's relationship. It's unique, it's fascinating and it has my support. The fact that they don't necessarily get along with the others around them to different degrees is a nice touch too, because too many authors tend to have a pairing share all of their relationships - good or bad - in lockstep. That's not realistic, so I prefer your take on it. Even their views on characters I ordinarily like, such as Sirius and Lupin, are a refreshing change. It also says a lot that the story is still so captivating even without antagonists like Snape and the Malfoys to drive the plot forward. I also appreciate that you've shown the damage both of the protagonists have suffered over the years manifest in a cynical and ruthless fashion. I fully expect to see more torture and murder in future and I don't mind that in this story because of how the characters have suffered. It reminds me of "Potters Against The World", which I'll recommend for similarity. It does have one aspect that is deeply disturbing in real life, but which I can accept in the story just like the actions of characters in yours. Anyway, I think that's enough of a tangent for now. I'm glad I found this story and I'm looking forward to reading more. I would be further in - possibly even finished - but for work. Cheers! |
Ruairi J.L chapter 1 . 2/7/2023 I wouldn't normally review a foreword, but you have admittedly caught my attention. I've searched in the past for a good story involving Harry and Pansy, but all of them fell short of my expectations. This, however, has a lot of potential. I was very pleased to read about your decision to portray them as rebellious/cunning teenagers who act as such, and I'm equally as pleased you won't shirk away from the more serious topics of abuse, sex and more. I have high hopes for this tale, especially because of its word count (it shows that you are devoted). As a rebellious clown once said: Here. We. Go! |
ShadowedDarkness1230 chapter 3 . 2/1/2023 The start to this story is decent concept-wise, but man, the tone of these characters is throwing me off. These aren't twelve-year-olds. They sound at least fifteen, probably older, but are supposed to be twelve. That is off-putting. I mean no offense when I say any of that—just stating my personal opinion. |
Fick Chick chapter 23 . 1/26/2023 "...neither of them are truly evil/dark/whatever enough yet..." Yet?! |
DarcYen chapter 92 . 1/26/2023 I can say that even tho I wouldn't read further or read a sequel I enjoyed the first third of the story for the most part. I have some issues with the Pansy reacts to Harry as some chapters it seems like He trust her more than she trust him and it occurred enough to be annoying. But otherwise I've read as much as I can stand. Keep at it have fun writing |
Azeri-Doni chapter 74 . 1/6/2023 Ended up looking up that song, didn't care for it. |
DragonHeart89 chapter 7 . 12/19/2022 If this is based off the ending of the second year, then it’s kind of creepy that they are so interested in hormone driven behavior at 12. |