God, I live Pansy so much in this story. She's so fascinating & layered.

This site would be so much better if not for pathetic, spineless bitches like Bostonette. Trolls must have such miserable lives.

You pathetic, spineless bitch. Stories like this garbage
should never be published for any reason. Especially when the author uses their own useless selves as Harry’s character, and has a horrible plot in every way as you do.

Pansy getting tipsy with her friend was a really cute & funny scene.

I can guess all the other 90 chapters in following sentences below.
All Pansy saying is right and Harry trusts her in one meeting and she’s going to be a heroine that will not do anything wrong and She suddenly became the best friend of Harry.
If you made at least a bit slow melding romance and add a bit drama into it, it would be a little more believable.
However, thanks and you are the king of your story and do whatever you want.
Best regards.

Hi.
My Dumbledore bashing sensors sensed a lord Harry potter with Dumbledore stealing from him and all the cliche in other fanfics.
Let’s see how story concludes.
I’m not a Dumbledore lover but I hate he’s bashed unfairly in most fanfics.
Most people don’t look at him like a person that can do wrong and right and he’s not a god without any faults.
However, thanks for writing this story.
It’s too soon for judging this fanfic.

Absolutely fantastic ending to Snape, I must admit it is perhaps my favourite to date; most people go over the top with punishment usually just have him perish to a killing curse or outright try to have the little traitor redeemed/seen as being a misunderstood hero, I'm truly impressed by your conclusion of him, it was truly satisfying on so many levels.

God, I love Slughorn in this- you've captured the fact that he genuinely liked Harry and thus he stepped up in spite of his cowardice and vanity, just like in canon when he was personally dueling Voldemort in the final battle.

Too many people seem to forget that, which is a shame as he's actually the best example of a nuanced character & the only Slytherin who isn't a bully, thug, or villain.

The previous reviewer is talking out of hiss ass. Pansy is never raped by anyone in this story. Fucking troll.

What is people's obsession with having the MC's romantic interest raped? Is that like a fantasy everyone except me has and im being weird?

Fucked up author and obviously a kid, nothing else to say ;p what's wrong with ALL fanfic authors? It's either sunshine, unicorns and rainbows K rated endings or Dark Eldar, nothing in between ;p same for their mc strength it's either pitiful useless pussy or god among gods, again nothing in between ;p
Mad.

ending was a bit of a let down but otherwise the story was fine

True sailors sail in the ‘Red Sea’

Great Story love the way the characters are coming alive….

You immediately hooked me with the lovely intro letter. It was really nice to peek into your brain for a bit, and I'm really looking forward to giving this story a read. Here goes nothing...

LOL. So after the latest Android update, the text to speech function can auto translate foreign words. Unfortunately, the Romanian word for "month" is "Luna". "Hestia and Flora?, the month asked". I was so confused!