ending was a bit of a let down but otherwise the story was fine

True sailors sail in the ‘Red Sea’

Great Story love the way the characters are coming alive….

You immediately hooked me with the lovely intro letter. It was really nice to peek into your brain for a bit, and I'm really looking forward to giving this story a read. Here goes nothing...

LOL. So after the latest Android update, the text to speech function can auto translate foreign words. Unfortunately, the Romanian word for "month" is "Luna". "Hestia and Flora?, the month asked". I was so confused!

Im still wondering why witches can't use the numbing charm? I mean actually stopping or altering their cycle could definitely have side effects just like muggle BC can, but just numbing the pain should be fine? It wouldn't completely help, obviously, but at least she wouldn't hurt as much. I know I'd love to have something like that for my RA flares

"It was very warm that day" LIES.
... Britain doesn't get warm lol

Yeah as someone who lives in Colorado, I'm with Harry on this, I can't for the life of me understand why anyone would choose to drink over pot. Alcohol made me dizzy, nasueous, drowsy and irritable. Weed never does that, if anything it HELPS all those things. Plus the pain relief. It annoys me that I can go to walmart and walk through shelves of bottles of wine and spirits but I have to go to a dispo and show an ID and only buy a limited amount with weed lol.

yeah arthritis sucks. And this is hard to dictate too, which is what I usually do

The previous reviewer is completely full of shit. This chapter featured the cover up of an accidental death, warnings about Death Eaters preparing to return, and the near death of Sirius- and not any lemons in sight. I don't know what they were smoking, but this is a far cry from PWP.

Reader, don't be fooledthis is a PWP lemon filled story that somehow spans 90 chapters. if you're into that, go for it, but if you like plot with your porn, find a different story.

I’m sorry, What the hell! The Dobby kissing comment almost made me puke.

What sort of lunatic would invent fish stew? I wouldn't be able to snog even Fleur without a breath freshening charm first lol.

Whoa!

(shoot, I accidentally hit send before I finished. Wish they would let me delete or edit old reviews). Well what I was saying is the fallout from harry and narcissa is very good to include because so many writers just assume "she's a hot blonde and he's a teenager what's the issue" and well the issue is a 13 yo doesn't have the emotional maturity and experience yet to deal with an actual adult relationship like that. Showing how traumatic it was for harry the day after was a good touch too.