When does harry get to tease and make the girls uncomfortable?

I have a point of contention over dobby here, yes pansy said harry was more important but harry is his master (and technically pansy's too) so he should have done as harry told him as he did during the 3rd task in the tournament no matter how he felt about it.

and what is with the constant underestimation of harry by the people closest to him? Dementors are something he has proven he can beat with little effort anymore and any number that would have been able to over whelm him would have been immediately apparent as people dropped dead left and right. Oh I am sure plenty of people are going to say 'oh but that's just them caring for him'. Did they ever stop to think that their lack of confidence in him could effect him by making him doubt his own abilities?

and there hermione goes trying to be mommy again...

I also think harry is confused as to what roleplaying the way 'he' wanted is. Other than the 'stupid french slut' comments and a few extra hard spanks (that she enjoyed anyways) he just did the things she wanted him to do the way she wanted them, not the way 'he' wanted them.

Ya know, I really don't think pansy should be forging harry's signature and claiming official family business without telling harry about it first. Especially seeing as he tells /her/ everything and lets her do whatever she wants anyways.

And just as hermione starts to drift quietly into the night (even if its not that far) he pulls her right back... yes I am pouting.

Oh and I keep forgetting to express how happy I am that moody was actually moody!

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Why didn't he just immediately pick the cup back up? Even if it didn't work at least then he would have known. Or his family ring, which is also a portkey!

I thought harry was going to wear his contacts for the last task specifically for the purpose of the danger of loosing his glasses and from the look of it he didn't.

As for the ritual I never understood why when the words 'forcibly taken' were uttered, harry didn't just give permission, even non-verbally. It would have fucked the whole ritual up.

what happened to dodging harry? you do remember how that works right? I mean you can't have thought he would follow a formal duel's rules, please tell me you aren't still that stupid, I had so much hope after the first 5 chapters... urrg all the build up of harry gaining strength and so far he is doing no better than Canon harry and canon harry didn't have any training!

Finally he's not just standing there!

No shit you should have worn your contacts. That was a basic precaution! why doesn't he just wear his decoys all the time now?

Someone needs to tell fudge to shut the fuck up or this will take all night. Better yet, why not get the pensieve (sp?) and give everyone a first hand look?

ah yes, hermione's all consuming 'need to know' once more rearing it's head. (Yes I HAD to get a dig at hermione)

would have been funny if they gave sirius an audio show like they did hermione, oh well lol, there's always the morning...

bwhahahaha if only albus knew XD he is so right yet also so wrong

Other than the fact that Rita was splattered on the floor I don't really get why her death is effecting the two of them so much. This is what, the 6th(?) person Harry has killed? I hope Sirius doesn't die :(

URGGG I KEEP FORGETTING! I keep meaning to ask what came of the house elf book, when do we find out about what happened with that?

XD XD XD XD oh my god I'm gonna die from laughing too hard, that was perfect!

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Why did she assume that one of the two of them undressed her? In a world of magic from a book worm that tries to know everything you would think she would know about switching charms.

"stupid Harry just had to be right." -Pot calling the kettle black much? That little hypocrite is just pissed that /she/ was proven WRONG.

XD oh man I hate the word cunt (unless circumstances require the use) but I love so much that pansy called her one to her face.

oh, so she finally thanked him. Annoying they had to reveal one of Dobby's skills to her and her proceeding to try and start an argument over what obviously was the truth. I am surprised she didn't try to lecture them about having obviously been sexually active though.

Bones' issue (in ref to not just this meeting but also the new years party) with Harry was because he wasn't all over her niece? I'm with Harry, if she is willing to make life hard for Harry just because her niece has a crush on someone she doesn't even talk to, then her lines about following the law are just a bunch of bullshit... but BAD harry for almost spilling the beans, he needs to practice his occlumency more. Speaking of I've been meaning to ask why didn't he work on it when Pansy was during 3rd year? Why wait?

I hope they got rid of that newspaper that Sirius brought with him...

Girls/women that do the mind game shit give all women a bad name.

Luna watching was kind of squicky but thats largely because luna seems the epitome of innocence most of the time.

I find it pathetic yet hilarious that harry had to give hermione the magical sex talk. Then she turns around and tries to stick her nose in it with harry and pansy's relationship and sex life. If they are telling you about the magical birds and bees i doubt they need you opinion on contraceptives, they obviously have it covered.

Then later it was extremely pathetic on hermione's part that she first tried to make out like harry was so immature as to be upset that she was with his tournament rival when he was trying to warn her (she didnt even let him get his sentence out before she was jumping to all the wrong conclusions), rightly so, that her date was someone to watch out for. Her accucusing harry of being crazy when he was defending his girlfriend was annoying, but i find their comments about her famous crushes funny because the only famous person she hasnt fallen for hook line and sinker for was harry. When she finds out that harry was right, she doesnt even thank him for the warning or the help (from dobby) just says she hates him for being right. Way to thank your friend for looking out for you and way to /not/ apologize for being a bitch for said looking out.

I do think this is the first time I have seen Harry come out as the sole Hogwarts champion, interesting twist.

Why didn't harry use the shielding charm like he did in the alley to protect Narcissa from the tomatoes? Or a water repelling charm? You'd think he would have learned that one after dobby used it on his glasses last year... It'll be interesting to see what you do with winky and how you handle Hermione's crusade for the the elves. Too bad or Harry though that Moody, who would have been what he was hoping for, is crouch jr. Though maybe you chose someone else, I recently read a story where crouch actually decided to masquerade as Filtch...

He's clinging tighter to Hermione now more than ever and she hasn't changed at all...

Interesting twist, but hermione's presence through the whole thing, especially with dobby available seemed kind of pointless, just a bit. That could be my bias talking, but only marginally.

Is it just me or is Harry giving Hermione more chances then he has given pretty much anyone else?

How many times is pansy going to show irrational jealousy before she just lets them 'out' their relationship? She keeps angrily ambushing Harry over other girls when he hasn't given her any reason to doubt his commitment.

Speaking of, their relationship seems a bit lopsided, she gets upset at him and he has to get her forgiveness. He questions anything to do with her plans, she gets pissy, and once more he has to get her forgiveness. He does as she asks (referring to sleeping with Narcissa obviously) and he has to get her forgiveness. That's not really a healthy relationship, the only thing that really goes both ways for them is sexual behavior and even then Harry tends to her every need (and then some just for the sake of being with her) while pansy uses her reciprocations as a reward or a distraction (not to say she doesn't have sex with him just for enjoyment but often enough, she has an alterior reason to go with it)... when do we get to see the formula flipped and pansy has to get Harry's forgiveness?