Glad I read all the way to the end. An exceptional story.

Though I do want to see your take on a Harry/Narcissa story one day.

1 for Cedric looking like a sparkly vampire :-)

First off, that was incredibly hot.

Next, I definitely like that Harry told a ton of people the truth- who knows how much it will help, but it's got to be better to spread the word. I love how Sirius stepped up to help the Carrows girls. That's a nice little parallel to how the Potters took him in. :-)

I really loved how several of the scenes set up people preparing for the war. Most of all, the scene with Slughorn was very interesting and seemed to set up the horcrux stuff much earlier.

Overall, I'd say year 4 of this fic was a step up from the earlier portions. I can't wait to see what comes next!

I loved everything about this chapter. From how you swapped POVs to keep the tension up to seeing how Harry managed to escape, it was definitely a thrill ride. And when Pansy trembled right after Harry got hit by the Cruciatus, I assume that was related to how she is bound to him? Very intriguing. :-)

For all the talk of independence that Harry has, his dependence on his friends has just been replaced by a dependency on Pansy. on the note of bashing and you saying that you're just writing them as they are, you still only write them through Pansy's eyes and she doesn't like his friends so it'll always come off as bashing

That shit at the end was retarded even with Harry being supposedly so powerful.

Best revenge on the Dursleys EVER! Hahahahah… I honestly thought either we would see a twist on the graveyard resurrection, for her mom, or that the bone was Leddy, and she would bring get back that way. Best Pansy and Narcissa I’ve ever seen. I love Harry’s neighbors. What a great story so far!

THAT'S our Dobby! What a pal he is!

I wonder, what does it actually mean for Harry if the Prophesy is fulfilled?

I think that Dobby should have asked permission to find a wife and also to be allowed to have little elve babies! But that is just me!

Dumbledore is always scheming, isn't he? The Git.

I love the way you cut back and forth between POVs at the final task, it gives a sense of the nervousness of Pansy & co. while Harry & Fleur deal with the danger.

And of course we get the requisite cliffhanger, lol. Going to hurry on to see how it plays out now. :-)

Their sex scenes are soooo GOOD! Dammit, where are the guys when they are needed?!

Well! We all KNEW that this would happen to Harry, otherwise what would the fun if all he did was watch? 'grin'...

The revenge on Snape was fucking AWESOME! And Dumbledore crying made it even better; it shows what a fool HE is.