Very satisfying overall. Thanks for crafting and sharing.

too bad HP didnt use a cutting curse, any who Hermione & Ron pairing is just silly, some girls like fixer uppers I guess but really. Krum would have been better heck Neville would have been better (never got the Hannaha thing)

feet fetish, sure why not :) Malfoy getting his comeuppance, always nice to see

I hate seeing such an amazing character die but it was a really good battle and I'm glad she got to go down fighting for her friends love the story so far.

Probably should have taken a photo of the beheaded corpse, but with Dobby preserving it, they could set up for a photograph later. Enjoyable, alternate plotting through the story.

Lime bunnies; find memories

meh still no fan of Lupin, he also disappears at the end of the 3rd book for the most part, and then runs away when tonks is pregant, so bleh

frankly with JKR views on things its no surprise she didnt talk about sex; really a school full of teenagers without supervision. they would be doing it like bunnies like most of my friends at that age.

yea I am not a fan of Lupin either, HP canon easily leans towards the guy but really he is a waste of space. Tonks and Him getting together, the only reason I can see is for the two of them to be killed nothing more.

OH, period sex is great, marry the guy who isnt grossed out about it :)

amusing, however beware the women without a large supply of chocolate

Didn't quite expect your plot twists, but the supernatural part was satisfactorily played out.

Dumbledore is interesting, I don't see an evil manipulative mustache twirling villain, HOWEVER we know in book 5 he set HP up. He knew Harry's life would suck at the Dursleys. We know by the end of the story HP is set to die like a pig. The life of the many outweighs the life of the one. however, he wanted HP to have a normal childhood. BUT he also knew that wouldn't happen as we see in book 5. So, is Dumbledore evil, no, a manipulative man who has an obsession with death, yea. Telling an orphan the only way for him to see his parents is for him to die. Sorry, i really dont like the character,

nice and not something that's pointed out in cannon, has to be an issue really. JKR i imagine gave no thought to the whole thing, if it wasn't pertinent to the story nor did HP see or care about it.

funny i have had conversations with people saying HP wasn't abused, WTF living in a cupboard and being called a freak is abuse, not physical sure but still. We used to call the first book Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone and Child Abuse

Well, in this kind of story, I was kind of hoping they had a magical daughter. However, based on the name "Frost" - it may be possible that Steven has a magical family line, as the wizarding names tend to be somewhat on the nose. Sometimes a strange grandparent is just peculiar, and sometimes they are from a wizarding family.