Reviews for We're In This Together |
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![]() ![]() ![]() amusing, however beware the women without a large supply of chocolate |
![]() ![]() ![]() Didn't quite expect your plot twists, but the supernatural part was satisfactorily played out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumbledore is interesting, I don't see an evil manipulative mustache twirling villain, HOWEVER we know in book 5 he set HP up. He knew Harry's life would suck at the Dursleys. We know by the end of the story HP is set to die like a pig. The life of the many outweighs the life of the one. however, he wanted HP to have a normal childhood. BUT he also knew that wouldn't happen as we see in book 5. So, is Dumbledore evil, no, a manipulative man who has an obsession with death, yea. Telling an orphan the only way for him to see his parents is for him to die. Sorry, i really dont like the character, |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice and not something that's pointed out in cannon, has to be an issue really. JKR i imagine gave no thought to the whole thing, if it wasn't pertinent to the story nor did HP see or care about it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() funny i have had conversations with people saying HP wasn't abused, WTF living in a cupboard and being called a freak is abuse, not physical sure but still. We used to call the first book Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone and Child Abuse |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, in this kind of story, I was kind of hoping they had a magical daughter. However, based on the name "Frost" - it may be possible that Steven has a magical family line, as the wizarding names tend to be somewhat on the nose. Sometimes a strange grandparent is just peculiar, and sometimes they are from a wizarding family. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i thought Pansy would do something with the Dementors, but still there was a chance it will go all pear-shaped, and end badly for her. so we shall see |
![]() ![]() ![]() another good chapter, look forward to more; personally, never a fan of Ron. Oh sure, he was 100% better in the books, a lot of what Hermione said in the movies he did however, he was a jealous berk right up to the very end. sadly for HP who had zero friends growing up he didn't want to lose one. As the whole story is pretty much POV of Harry we know that he had no other friends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good boyfriend |
![]() ![]() ![]() Always liked the Narcissa who is more black than malformed , good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter, look forward to more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good follow-ups on your plot twists. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a nice start, different than daphne look forward to more |
![]() ![]() ![]() So was the killing curse spread out among everyone who owed Harry a life debt? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, I thought he would recognize Malfoy Manor, but if they are already at the Department of mysteries, that's good. |