| Reviews for We're In This Together |
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   John Ciaccio chapter 92 . 11/28/2021 Loved the plot, |
| Village-Mystic chapter 75 . 11/28/2021 Good drama, character moments and alternate plot. |
| Village-Mystic chapter 73 . 11/28/2021 Good follow-ups on new ground, character moments, plot. |
| Village-Mystic chapter 72 . 11/27/2021 One of the things that I really like about this story is the alternate defense training that Harry is doing. It isn't a secret, and it isn't quite a club - operating more like a spontaneous get together - and using the grounds of the school to practice. |
| Village-Mystic chapter 70 . 11/27/2021 This was an excellent pay-off chapter. |
| Village-Mystic chapter 68 . 11/27/2021 I can't quite tell if you are heading towards dedicated or casual polyamory with Pansy and Harry, but maybe they should find some books about open and closed relationships. |
| Village-Mystic chapter 67 . 11/26/2021 Good follow through and fun new mysteries. |
| Village-Mystic chapter 66 . 11/26/2021 Good remix of original plot point elements, new ground, and character interaction moments. |
| Village-Mystic chapter 65 . 11/26/2021 Good connective tissue,and follow-up on the friendships and family elements. |
| Village-Mystic chapter 63 . 11/25/2021 Likes - Moody was the real Moody. Bonding with Sirius, portkeys for Luna and Hermione Uncomfortable - lack of a talk of safe words - we don't really know if Harry and Pansy have one, as Harry didn't respond to "no." They love each other, but this was really bad. It is plausible that one or both of them would have heard of safe words with their adult socializing over the summer, but without mentioning it to the reader Harry's new skill use is not at all cute. Even for adults in their 20s or 30s. Pondering - giving Hermione one of the magical tents in case she needs to bug out with her parents, and not leave them behind if something goes on. |
| Village-Mystic chapter 61 . 11/24/2021 Intriguing alternate plot points. |
| Village-Mystic chapter 60 . 11/24/2021 Great alternate plot points, plus Harry recognizing the imperius curse on another |
| Village-Mystic chapter 58 . 11/24/2021 Good alternate and new plot points and character moments. |
| Village-Mystic chapter 57 . 11/24/2021 An unusual choice to dip into Dumbledore's POV without revealing too much. If Dumbledore were wise, he'd also be keeping look out for Luna and Hermione, too. Yet, I expect that Hermione will still be a hostage, or at least I hope she has the chance to say no (and they take a classmate of Victor's). |
| Urgazhi chapter 92 . 11/24/2021 Well, I want sure if I had read it all, when I saw this. I had, and have, twice now. Laughs. It's a good story. Great job. |