FATALITY. On a more serious note, I'm enjoying this more than I thought I would the first time I saw it in someone's "Favorites" list.

Good new and alternate plot points. I'm of the thought that Moody is really Moody this time (so far), because if it is Barty he's teaching way more than the intel he's getting.

I find it really weird how Moody says it has never seen a ward on enchantment to block house elves, considering there was such a ward on the department of mysteries... And Moody was there... And I'm pretty sure Dobby said that it exists in his presence...

I wonder in the total file how many times any character snorts. Laughs. To be fair it is a very snarky reaction. I'm almost disappointed that Luna doesn't get to sleep with Harry in this.

Yep, people who have been training for combat have really good reflexes. Thank goodness they have Dobby.

You need to look up the dish pollo de mole, it's chocolate and peanut sauce on chicken.

This was a hard chapter for me. You knew where you were going, but this reader did not.

I forgot how meta this gets with death as a character.

Right if Dumblledore had explained the venom becoming part of the sword, Harry may have only used it purely defensively, instead of ahead of time defensive.

Well, things that I like: Pansy making friends with Hestia and Flora and keeping a line of friendship open with Daphne. Harry in this version knowing what deliberate female flirting looks like. Harry training with Luna, Pansy and Hermione where they can team-up tactically against a more difficult foe.

What I'd like to see: Luna and Hermione invited to listen to records and learning how to dance for the ball.

Your relationship moments tend to fall in the really great for 25 to 45 year olds, and fantasy with low probability for young adults. The story is clearly rated M, and I hang around for the rest of the plot and character moments.

So did Harry and Pansy never get Luna that blonde wig for winky?

Lawyer. Lawyers read contracts well.

I forgot about the response to umbridge downfall...

It looks of weirds me out that Sirius is planning on courting a girl that was vying for Harry's hand when he was younger.

He must be 10 or 12 years older than her? Not to mention the crass conversation around her status as a virgin. Just fully off-putting.

While you do have Harry recognizing a separation from Ron, it seems much more amical (sp?), friendly, than in some stories I've read.