Reviews for We're In This Together |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if little Teddy would even know what a scientist is... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Something that I thought of while reading this, would purebloods even know what the word programmed means? I kind of wondered about the source of the word. I do kind of like the hints of Pansy getting fleur's hair for the polyjuice potion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like your Carrow twins. I wouldn't say no to reading a story about Harry and them. Nicely done |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely holiday remix with new ground elements. Yep, good thing Harry isn't in charge of *all* of the planning. Although some of the planning he's doing is good and effective. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is by far still my favorite end to Rita. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Hermione, Harry tried to warn her .. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Could a house elf be untransfigured from being a bone, I wonder? Was she dead before transfigured, or not dead and just dicarded. Very sad that he killed his wife, too. The confession thing was good. I hope Harry doesn't make a habit of this, regardless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, oh God. This Viktor, this Hermione... He preys on little girls. I forgot how real you wrote this bit. Angst! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good, new alternate plot points. Harry is interacting with the headmaster on a reasonable level. His house ring probably prevents or assists in preventing legimancy, even if he doesn't know what it is yet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, and I hope they pay Colin and don't just run them without a by-line. Good use of getting better to being the center of attention for short periods of time, and dealing with "the press" and adulation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() POV of dementors is scary. How many people did they kill/kiss? It sounds like quite a few. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an excellent story. The writing is well done and the plot is consistent. The characters of Harry and Pansy are very disturbed, realistically so. They both should be in prison or a mental health ward, but considering Voldemort needed to be dealt with they were the best team for the job. There’s a lot of gratuitous sex, to the point it bogged down the story, but that’s probably my personal opinion. I suspect it’s a plus for many. The author did an exceptional job. Highly recommended. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This ending for Dumbledore is sort of poetic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a nice twist for Hermione to be upset with being obliviated, considering what she did to her parents in canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, if you're not going to teach children that Obliviate should be unforgivable, then they are going to use it. I see Lupin as the stooge here, but Harry doesn't have to forgive him for that. |