I WONDER if Harry will actually learn that Sirius Black DID NOT betray his parents? Hmmm.

THIS WAS QUITE POSSIBLY the nicest Chapter that has been written so far, and Ron hasn't
even shown up. I sincerely hope it stays that way. Ron has betrayed Harry too many times
to be considered a TRUE friend, and Dumbledore OBVIOUSLY has his own agenda. Sadly,
Hermione Granger still believes ALL Authority figures MUST be obeyed. Also, she only sees
the world in shades of black and white, there is no grey area for her, which makes her
somewhat unreliable.

YEP, that was Classic Hermione Granger-and it was written beautifully. Harry DOES have a
point though. That point being that it usually IS him, Ron and Hermione who continually
have to save whatever is threatening Hogwarts, while the adults do DAMN ALL to help!

I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY, and the way it has been planned, conceived and perfectly
executed, shows that a great deal of thought was put forth into making this story one of the
much better ones.

BRILLIANT! Just first-class! When they're not at each other's throats, Harry & Pansy make an
excellent team! I can read Ron like a book. He's clearly a mercenary, and only in it for the
money. Hermione is a narrow-minded know-it-all, and clearly a fake friend.

Chapter 5 of "We're In This Together" continues to read like a Harry Potter Classic should,
so let me say, author, just how greatly impressed I am with your story so far. Please, don't
disappoint me, as this story shows a hell of a lot of potential.

SOMEHOW, I doubt that Harry will let ANYONE-be it Hermione, Ron, McGonagall let alone
Dumbledore walk all over him. By my reckoning, Harry most likely considers them traitors
like Pettigrew, and he'll probably do ANYTHING to rid himself of them.

NICE ONE! Only a few mentions of Ron Weasley, and the human dustbin didn't even make
one appearance! I'm liking this story more at more!

Now THIS DEFINITELY HAS POSSIBILITIES OF BECOMING A Harry Potter fanfiction Classic!
However, Zugrian, a piece of friendly advice here from a guy who's been writing his own
original stories for 47 years: I have VERY HIGH STANDARDS. "Rage" by The Girl With Far
Too Many Ideas, is what I consider a GREAT STORY. And please limit the Ron-Pansy
confrontations if you can. His continual "all Slytherins are evil!" rant is becoming tiresome.

I agree with you on that point. Draco & Hermione IS beyond disgusting, BUT EVEN WORSE
ARE THE Harry & Draco fanfics. That is SO NOT ON! They're meant to be mortal enemies,
for Christ's sake, NOT lovers! But yes, Pansy SHOULD be given a chance to shine. Plus, as
Daphne and Astoria have proven many times, Harry DOES BENEFIT FROM A Slytherin
perspective. So I'm will to give this a chance.

its frustrating the stupid double standard you have written pansy can hide literally everything from him and she gets pissed at him ? this is a shitty relationship period.

loving the story

Considering that there is a room full of undelivered post that is taking Dobby weeks to go through, I find Harry’s anger at Remus to be unfounded. Maybe Remus tried to write to Harry every week, but the letters couldn’t get through. This should at least be discussed before Harry declares Remus his Enemy For Life (TM). I am enjoying the rest of the story, but this bit is not well-considered.

It was going so well but this is the tipping point
1) He is barely even cynical only when it is plot convenient does he become cynical
2) this is the part the fic actually got boring for the past few chapters nothing significant actually happend there is nothing remotely intresting in pansy, lavender and patil helping neville
3) you stated that this is not a smut or something similar but so far literally each chapter has at the start, middle and end harry doing pansy it’s so repetitive
4) harry trully did not get affected by his childhood all his childhood did was make him slightly cynical and mentally and physically dependent on pansy he can’t do or think anything for himself like instead of trying to learn more about the magical world all he does is rely on pansy to tell him what to do
5) he is LORD potter for gods sake and yet nothing significant even came out of that he still acts as though he does not have any political power
6) this is the worst point i’d say and its that basically the whole start of this book has been forgotten
A) he has the necessary knowledge to figure out this whole black buisness
B) his mothers dairy has also been dumped in the bin
7) its chapter 36 and yet we are not even halfway through the ‘evil’ sirius thing like i’ve said before this is indirectly a lemon fic but without the lemons I understand that this is a fic about ‘what if pansy and harry were together’ but this is just too much
So there that is my review
It was going well but i am guessing you experienced a some kind if block during these chapters making you forget what you wrote about before

Previous reviewer: "Malfoy was never evil in canon" bruh wut? The dude willingly gave an evil cursed diary to an 11 year old girl and laughed gleefully while she released a weapon of mass destruction of a snake on the muggleborn. How in the world is that not evil? And that's just barely scratching the surface...