love it

Great story!

i really love this story! please update!

I hope you update one day it was gettting interesting

bro what?

doing your character dirty, accel world? thats extreme

Oof randomly making your MC drunk because of a technique he's practicing just to force a random out-of-character plot point. It kind of feels like there are a lot of attempts at being funny that fall flat.

Overall it feels like the story is hard carried by the interesting ability of the MC. It keeps attention just enough to make it past the somewhat bad writing for awhile.

What a disappointing chapter. MC just gave all his secrets away because he's a fucking retard. On top of that, you bring back his fat ass self for some reason. Almost makes me want to drop with the amount of shit you just dropped on us in this chapter.

hey you should make rock lee into a cultivator.

... Will the Koi transform into a dragon?...

The whole plotline of making kaguya into a deity seems so fucking lame, honestly it was in my top 10 story for this year until that came to pass even if there were others points i didn't like much, the story was enjoyable and made me laugh irl (when the lizard attacked mc like a warrior?) so it was good enough, but having mc be used like that, and him being dumb enough to put on the Mask for a stupid War games with no consequences was stupid as hell
Passed from a 9/10 to a 5/10

Every time Kaguya speaks it ends in a question mark. Many times this should be a period. If you wanna denote a songlike quality to a voice you should do something like this. “For the world is your Kenjisaid Kaguya.

What an insufferable loser.

sir? i love your fanfic please update nowbthat your back T-T

That scene where kenji is told what Tsunade got her nickname for makes me laugh every time I read it.

Amazing loving the story looking forward to more.