Reviews for These Unfortunate Affairs
Guest chapter 21 . 1/18/2021
Oh. That was unsatisfying, to say the least... I had hoped for a positive development in their marriage, but... oh well. Elizabeth is like a child... no real feeling of a romantic kind. She plays with her botanical toys, and that's it. Darcy is spineless. He can face pistols but not ask for more in their marriage. That's sad. And now they will abandon Pemberley for good. It was a fun story in the beginning, but it got stuck on the mysteries with no character development. Mercifully it ended, as it was not moving forward. Thank you, it was fun for a while...
liysyl chapter 21 . 1/18/2021
I really enjoy your unfortunate affairs and I hope you continue when things calm down. Thanks for sharing your story and stay safe.
sunshine.katz chapter 21 . 1/18/2021
Thanks for the interlude. Love the glimpses of what they have been up to (although I am curious about Bath, especially if Anne is involved!). Hope all is well for you in the midst of home-schooling and other real life concerns.
Guest chapter 21 . 1/18/2021
No children for Darcy' s...
Nice..murder involving missy and Mrs.R?
I wouldn't mind killing either.
Ahhh...too much at home...
Colleen S chapter 1 . 1/18/2021
Love this story!
Aethelfraed chapter 21 . 1/18/2021
These are always delightful. I appreciate you sharing them. Poor Darcy must be pretty frustrated by now.
Joan G. Brand chapter 1 . 1/18/2021
Well, after reading Chapter 21, I came back to the beginning of the book(s) to discover why Miss Bingley was no longer a part of the story. Unfortunately, she was given too much laudanum by just about everyone in the house who wanted her to sleep soundly and not disturb anyone with her annoying mouth. She must have received at least six doses: Bingley, Jane, the housekeeper, her abigail (2), and Mr. Hurst.

Wickham arrived and was not able to fool Elizabeth because Darcy was a guest at Longbourn along with Mr. Collins. Elizabeth knows the truth, and she also rejected Mr. Collins' proposal. Mrs. Bennet was angered as usual, and Mr. Bennet allowed Elizabeth to have her way.

Now Darcy and Elizabeth no longer want to leave each other's company.
Joan G. Brand chapter 21 . 1/18/2021
Good luck with homeschooling! I can imagine the trial, especially when the Internet goes down or the image simply freezes.

I will have to backtrack and read as I am totally unfamiliar with this series. I appreciate you sending it. Why are Darcy and Elizabeth married if there is little romance, nor do there appear to be children forthcoming anytime soon! What happened to Miss Bingley?

Elizabeth at least seems to have a knack for solving problems. I am surprised that she finds Pemberley too tame and quiet, especially since she loves the country and long walks. Has she changed that much?
ChrisM0519 chapter 20 . 1/18/2021
In the end Weasby lost more than what he gained in the will; his fortune, control of his niece's estate and most likely influence over his sister's life.
Katie500 chapter 21 . 1/18/2021
Thank you for this little interlude. I hope things start to get back to normal over the coming months and you find time and inspiration to write againgood luck with the home schooling, I’m sure it’s a handful!
Luckythedog chapter 20 . 1/14/2021
I really like your story! Your depiction of Elizabeth and Darcy reminds me a little of Tommy and Tuppence from Agatha Christie, but can you please have them fall in love with each other, and not just a marriage of convenience? I think they already are, but it would be nice to know, even though the focus of the story isn't on romance.
Aphrodite in Disguise chapter 20 . 12/21/2020
You're so amazingly talented! I look forward to reading more whenever you're ready to post
RHALiz chapter 1 . 11/30/2020
... anything yet...pls, pls, pls
Leovigild chapter 20 . 9/8/2020
Oooo this soooo goooddd... I keep coming back to read it every so often .. love the detective duo I am also excited that their feelings are finally changing and theyre moving forward
Wonder how it continues
Great job with this story
cb chapter 20 . 8/21/2020
I am desperate for an update. Pls. I beg you to come back to this story
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