Reviews for Siblings
Bevey99 chapter 1 . 4/20/2018
Even as step-siblings the law in most states is severe with regards to marriage, which includes jail time. Children is a big no-no. Great writing of a taboo subject. Thank you, and good luck.
sherylb chapter 1 . 4/20/2018
Their parents are foolish. They lost their children and grandchildren too
archy12 chapter 1 . 4/20/2018
Wonderful writing! Though this theme has been tackled before in fanfic, this is the first one-shot I have read where Edward and Bella are step-siblings, and it is absolutely captivating. Very well done indeed!
fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 4/20/2018
Amazing story i love it.
dpennell007 chapter 1 . 4/20/2018
No sugarcoating here! Too bad about their parents, but it's a realistic reaction. The Kate side plot came out of left field for me. I liked the ending!
debslmac chapter 1 . 4/20/2018
:) loved this. Really well written
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 4/19/2018
Oh my God I love this story so much! You are such a wonderful writer! I absolutely loved their relationship and backstory. You could really feel the tension in the room when things heated up and felt too real. I felt like them a little being perverted for finding your story so hot! I can not wait to vote for you! Only thing is I'm wondering Edwards pov!
orchidluv chapter 1 . 4/19/2018
It's sad, but I can see Renee reacting like that. Great story and good luck!
grandmachix chapter 1 . 4/19/2018
When it's love, what can you do? They are not biological siblings. There love is not illegal, but society would condemn them. An amazing story.
Lovely Black Butterfly chapter 1 . 4/19/2018
I love the story. I read one of the comments someone wrote that this was better than Bella and Charlie Swan story. I really don't see the difference if its step relations it shouldn't matter. I happen to be a non-canon reader, and really don't read a lot of Edward/Bella pairing, but I do like this. I'm beginning to think I enjoy E/B AH vs Vampire Edward. Good Luck
mrsvixter chapter 1 . 4/19/2018
fantastic story
written very well
loved it romantic and heartfelt
starsmina chapter 1 . 4/19/2018
awesome story thx and good luck
Lilypad10 chapter 1 . 4/19/2018
Wow, just wow. This was a great story.
left in bits chapter 1 . 4/19/2018
I absolutely loved this. So well written and descriptive and heartfelt. I loved it. Thank you for sharing!
AnakinSmom chapter 1 . 4/19/2018
Interesting story. Young and hormonal and so many emotions to deal with. It's a shame the parents were so uncompromising in their thoughts about it all.
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