|Reviews for Xenoblade Chronicles Links|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2018
Aside from making a story, just improve your formatting so the story can be more appealing for any reader. Other people will tell you this. I can let it slide for the first chapter, especially if you made this on a mobile device which would most likely be your phone.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2018
Please format your writing with lines, one long bulky paragraph is too much to read at once.
| BouncyKittyKat55 chapter 1 . 4/20/2018
You're still editing it right? This grammar is the worst. No offense.