really like how u subverted my expectations here and started off with link having a memory. felt smooth, seemless. well done!

loved the dialogue between link and impa here

really enjoying ur characterization of Kass in this chapter. ready to read more

really enjoying this so far. very well done. liking how u have been kinda filling in the gaps so to speak. looking forward to reading more

Wow! Just wow! This novel is fantastic, I really enjoyed reading the whole thing. From start to finish, you had me caught up in the whole thing. I really really want to replay the whole thing all over again, now! Your fight scenes were really great too. I was able to follow them quite well, which is a treat since most fanfictions I read tend to have really chaotic fight scenes. It was really sweet when Link and Zelda was finally able to get together. How they just ended up taking the time to just be. What a great, fantastic, amazing novel! I really hope you write something again, wether its a sequel to this, or something brand new!

Excellent chapter!

Great prologue!

Loved this novelization! Very well written. I was also listening to the audio for as much as there was while reading but had to keep reading on after that. You have a pretty good setup for going into tears of the kingdom if you plan on continuing a novelization of that as well.

nevermind, the author on ao3 said they forgot to edit it more heavily and they changed it so its like more taking inspo from the chapter instead of straight up lifting if anyone sees this, pls dont go after the guy btw

also idk if the author reads the comments but i really like your fic! sorry for cluttering up the reviews T_T

my bad guys, wrong link - here is correct link to the fic

/works/40057158/chapters/103150995

o shit wasnt expecting that plagiarism claim to be true, but it apparently is 0_0 wow um hopefully thats an alt account and that author clears things up soon
heres the fic in question:
/chapters/103150995?show_commentstrue&view_full_workfalse#comment_688810921

This is so well written like literally omg I'm reading the whole thing

Hello Zed. Thank you for creating this wonderful work. I love so much this story. I came here to warn you that, unfortunately, it seems that your work was plagiarized. In a fanfic Zelda Crossover with Three Houses fanfic called "The Heroes of Legend: Year One", written by Critica7 on the Archive of Our Own (AO3) website, in chapter 28 of it, there are several paragraphs identical to your chapter 9 of your fanfic Breath of the Wild. Here is the copied part:

Link stared at the graphic of the sword. "Impa. What of the sword?"

She hesitated for several moments. Link considered to be a bad sign. "The Legendary Blade has had many names over the years. The Blade of Evil's Bane. The Sword that Seals the Darkness. The Master Sword." Her voice was carefully controlled, but he could tell that his question dela concerned her. "You were chosen by it—and it did choose you. No one else could have pulled it from its resting place."

"But where is it? Won't I need it?"

Again, she hesitated. "I… do not know, Link." His heart sank. "It was damaged in your fight against the Guardians before you fell. I never saw it with my own eyes; that information was relayed to me by the princess.

"She assured me that it would be repaired in time, and that it would be revealed to you when it again deemed you worthy of wielding it."

"We may not have time to wait!" Link shouted. "That sword is the key to victory against Ganon. And no one alive knows where it is!"

"The Princess—"

"We can't guarantee she'll be able to tell me where to find it!" Link protested. "We might not have time to wait!"

Impa slapped him. He stared at her, shocked.

"Our princess was seventeen when the Calamity befell Hyrule. And for seventeen years, she worked—every day—to awaken her sealing powers that would enable her to combat Ganon. You traveled with her for a short time but make no mistake. She had been told since she was a little child that she needed to learn to use her powers. She was made to pray to the Goddess every day—every day—for her powers to wake. And they did not."

"But she she—"

"They did not, Link!" Her voice raised, cutting him off. "Not until Ganon had risen and destroyed everything and everyone she had ever loved. Not until her closest friends were killed. Not until you fell in battle. Only after all of that, only then did her power awaken.

That's it. I don't know if you'll see it, but I'd like you to check it out. I hate that a story this good has someone taking snippets of it to use as their own.

You son of a bitch you did it….

Holy shit. He isn’t going to fight Gannon now right? He hasn’t even told the divine beasts to fire yet!