Nice chapter!
I can't wait to see more characterization, botw was a bit lacking in terms of story.

Great chapter! Traveling should be faster once link gets some shrines completed/learns how to use the teleport function.
I didn't find any errors, good job!

This is a great story so far! I'm so glad someone decided to do a novelization of Breath of the Wild! Thank you, and keep up the great work!

Amazing work so far man. I've been checking on and off for a Breath of the Wild story that would do the game justice in its purest form. And, I think you've really hit the right notes here and are writing something that will turn out to be an amazing finished products. The chapters I've read so far are of great quality, little grammar, and have had some very good adaptation with proper pacing. Keep up the good work and take your time, because so far it's been worth it.

Great chapter!

This is so great! The runes are finally here! Good job on describing them and Link is so cute trying to find out how to use them.

Nice chapter, I like how link didn't have to go through the shrines to get the runes, it's rather tedious and not really necessary for the story.

I'm really enjoying this so far! I like reading BotW novelizations just because there are so many ways you could go about doing it, and a few days ago I was just thinking "man, you'd probably need to make this a 300k epic to really do the game justice" and then right after I came across this fic? What a great coincidence! It's very well written with excellent pacing, and the minor changes you've made seem to work very well so far and make me excited for how you're going to deal with future events in the game. I can tell this won't be a straight gameplay novelization, and I'm very happy about that. One question: will you be completely omitting the shrines in this fic, or did you just have the king give Link the paraglider without having to complete the shrines for pacing or other reasons? Not that I'll complain either way, I'm just curious. Please keep up the great work! I'll be eagerly reading!

Good story!

Nice chapter, I like how link kinda feels sorry for the monsters.

Great or nice

You did a great job on writing the story!
I've never played the game, I only watched them others play it and you got the great points in the game! I loved the fighting scenes! I'll be following the story.

A regularly updating 300k word epic? I look forward to it!

Is there anything divergent in the story from the canon? It's ok if it's not, I'm just curious as to what's going to happen.