I love it! Will you continue it? Would love to read more.

great entry!

Really enjoyed this! Always a fan of a Bella/Emmett pairing

Very, very cute!

I thought Bella was a actual lion fo a bit. Lol. I’m glad she wasn’t. Good luck.

Well... that was cute, but really? You stopped it there? Not cool. :(

However, it was certainly a fun tale. :) It would have been nice to know more about Bella's history than just the fact she is related to the owner of the resort/reservation. Such as, why wasn't Emmett aware of her until now, since he had been there for about two years? After all, it seems her father, siblings, and step mother either live there or are very familiar and possibly regular visitors (more than just an annual thing), so it would seem likely she is also.

Great story! Loved the little surprise at end. Would love to see more.

I definitely enjoyed this story and it was interesting to see an OC Rick setting them up. They had so much to connect on deeper levels and their mutual love of the cats.

Adorable!

I hope this becomes more than a one shot it is awesome and I want more

Please update ASAP

:) loved this. I hope there will be more

I’m kind of hoping you have more planned for this story after the contest. I’d really like to see what happens next.

Thanks for sharing your writing and best of luck in the contest.

So creative! A fun read :)

Not a fan of Bella w/ someone else, but this was really good. Good luck.

I love it. There has to be more.