i don't know about you but i think that Harry need to keep some things to himself. He tells Ron and Hermonie every thing

Thank you for not making Molly the anti-slytherin that she is in most other haphne stories. It's a nice change.

That was always my favorite song of the Hat's.

And said what not many people notice - if you look at the themes, it wasn't just Slytherin against the others, it was all of them that thought they knew best. Slytherin leaving just shocked them into stopping.

Judt loved it. Every fustrating, cheesy, wonderful minute of reading it. Thank you so much for this faithful, yet unique branch to this story. And for not killing Sirius!

I realized Hedwig is very smart, and you might address this in an author's note or something in the next chapter or later, but there would be no way for Hedwig to deliver a letter to someone that Harry doesn't even know who it is. The other letters were sent with the person's owl and sent back to that person with the person's owl, not Harry's.

Fuck McGonagall!

Kill Umbridge and Malfoy jr and sr!

I truly hope that Umbridge gets offed really quickly!

Harry's punishments with the toad are already boring you used that same punishment in Lion.
In addition, you also used the threat of the toad in Lion.
And although he hates him and is a traitor, you also repeat yourself marking Ron as in Lion.
THAT'S WHY I STOP READING THIS FIC.

Poison. Basilisk venom. Leave the country with Sirius.

Harry usually is a bit of an idiot. He is 15, is under full attack, and has no plans to protect himself. He has been taught to quietly take punishment. He borders on masochistic, thinking he is strong if he can take it. Same as Canon, of course. Snape, Dumbledore, and Harry himself thinks Harry is immune to serious harm.

Draco has terminal stupid. Threats could get him shot in the back.

Ass... that chapter I couldn't read fully. So I skimmed through it then went and read through it fully.

Bravo there's only so much angst I can deal with

Ahh... fluffy goodness

Alas, I do foresee some angsty crap coming up. A pissed off malfoy usually tends to create inventive ways to derail a good stress free mood

I'm glad I looked at the reviews of your story, now I know it's not worth reading...

huge amount of inconsistencies, harry trusts his "friends" too much even though they haven't written to him in 1 month, he doesn't get angry with them, he doesn't get angry with his slavers, he doesn't try to eat more to compensate for the tiny amount they give him. .. I've spent a week without barely eating and I've lost 3-4 kilos, and I don't do as much physical work as Harry supposedly does, so if he's already thin for his age, he eats little and spends 10-12 hours doing physical tasks almost without eating... I would be practically anorexic...

basically if you're reading this (whether you're the writer or someone who wants to know if the story is worth it) it's not worth it, too many inconsistencies and too unreal harry... he should be more angry with his friends, he shouldn't have told him about it the letters, he should have mentioned to the dursleys about sirius to receive more food, he should have been anorexic from so little food and so much physical work, he should have gotten sunstroke from working almost from sunrise to sunset with hardly any breaks or water (as it is not mentioned I doubt he was resting or drinking)...

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