This was a fantastic read I was hooked from start to finish! The world you built felt so immersive, and the way the story unfolded kept me fully engaged. I’d love to hear more about what inspired some of your creative choices. Were there any particular scenes or characters that were especially meaningful to you while writing?

Any behind the scenes insights or fun details would be amazing to hear. Overall, this piece stands strong on its own, and I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it . I’m really looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future!

Ironic that between when you started writing this and now that Super went and shot Gohan back up to near UI level with "Beast", which combined with...

Actually... Does Old Kai just not exist in this timeline? I know the Z-sword had a voice, but that raises real questions, as this version of Gohan could very well be significantly weaker than his canon counterpart, at least in part due to never undergoing the ritual with Old Kai.

My logic is as follows:

Canon BoG Goku put up a decent fight against Beerus, with a statement that was later retconned that he made Beerus fight at 50% of his full power.

SGTD Gohan doesn't perform much better, and doesn't seem to have any notable power boosts after, compared to his canon counterpart, who was at least near Blue Goku with Ultimate, then got into the ballpark of the "Ultra-derivative" transformations with beast.

I can’t wait to see what happens next! One selfish hope I have is that Krillin, Yamcha, and Tien get to help some more, but this has been fantastic so far. Keep up the great work!

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He leído este capítulo tres veces, de verdad me impacto demasiado y me gustaría ver que es lo que pasa por la mente de los guerreros z al ver a Gohan actuar de una manera "extraña".

Espero con ansias el siguiente capitulo!

Lo que paso fue completamente inesperado... ¡Fue un giro completamente inesperado! Ahg! Lo sentí como si hubiera sido una pesadilla, una terrible pesadilla, tanto esfuerzo y descubrió que él era solo un experimento de Wiss, un peon en un juego de ajedrez!
Fue un reinicio, si, pero también fue algo muy bueno e interesante, un capitulo realmente increíble! Quizás Gohan pueda considerar esto como una segunda oportunidad para su vida para tener un equilibrio entre el estudio y el entrenamiento ...

Ah! Ya quiero leer el siguiente capitulo, buen trabajo!

Post: me encantaría que de alguna manera Gohan conozca a Makhai y al resto de los miembros que formaron parte de la guardia suprema, ellos no se pueden quedar en el olvido así como así ¿cierto?

Hiding in the bathroom from my kids to read this, defo did not see that twist coming and I am LIVING for it, omg thank you. I have had assumptions for a while now that he might eventually end up mortal again or somehow end up giving away or losing his position, but never expected it would go down as both in such a sad and crazy way, especially not at the current point in the story.
I'm so mad that I have to wait for more, haha.

Man this is absolutely diabolical... did Gohan somehow go to past to the cell games? This one of the best fics I ever read

I have never been so hard as after reading this chapter. Absolutely magnificent. You're definitely one of the best writers that I have ever had the pleasure to read from. Keep up the great work!

Can't wait for Council to have to accept Gohan back as the only one who can save them all.

This feel like a reset :O

Honestly, Whis should have just let Perses kill Gohan. Permanent death would have been more preferable than this crap. After all those sacrifices, for naught. Now he's back right where his power was before he died, and he de-aged as a result. Now he can't be with Videl from the age gap (nor would Videl want him anyway, considering the way she's been acting). Yeah, death would have been easier than putting up with this bullcrap. Whis really should have just let Perses finish Gohan off...

It’s nice to know even in an alternate universe Uub and piccolo still aren’t as impressive as Goku and vegeta

Who else is okay with seeing Perseus partially win after this chapter? Show of hands.

*raises own*

Things are just not looking good for Gohan... Damn I ain't gonna lie, I don't comment much, but Gohan's get back BETTER be worth it cause this shit is Diabolical... You sure you don't work as a Spiderman comics writer on the side?