Reviews for What is Love?
Plasmolysed Cell Membrane chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
Okay, I actually read until chapter 22 so... this review is for it until there. anyways, the plot isn't THAT great. But it isn't bad. The thing that's bad is that you shouldn't have wrote it in a script form. a story like this always requires a lot of the showing of emotions through subtle actions. Don't tell us what Harry is doing, you have to show us so we can feel like we're there. The story is too quick... slow down. Yup. that's all.
Banana Belle chapter 12 . 5/7/2003
Great story, I hope to see more soon.
Justine E Brooks chapter 1 . 4/28/2003
good story and plot just a little choppy with the dialouge set up...lil' tibit of advice try writing in paragraph form