A bery interesting story. It was very very sad in places but i loved the way you described the changes in Harry as things progressed and why. I would have liked to have known more about the political changes but understand that that that was beyond the scope of the story. Thank you

Well the story was interesting until you killed it by killing his wife. No follow. No favourite.

This was a bit of a different read for me, but I was looking for something different… A nice change to Harry leaves the wizarding world, and a nice use of several OC’s.

Now, for some constructive criticism… A beta or using a spell check would probably eliminate many of your minor grammatical errors here and there, but most were easily mentally interpreted. And having some sort of page break aspect would help, because you would have characters in one paragraph somewhere, then you’re talking about different characters somewhere else, and it was a little bit confusing at times. Again, a beta would help.

I rather enjoyed reading this story and will be sending a link to someone who I share stories with…

Germans didn't want to talk about their deeds to their children?
Germans all over the world were mistreated for decades to come. German children born after WW2 were treated like lepers in America just because they were Germans. Try talking about Germans put in concentration camps after WW2, fool.

This is a masterpiece!

What a ride. Quite a different approach. A bit sad with K. And all but i can understand it from a writers perspective.

Hi, loving this - so different from all the usual Harry Potter fanfics. Does anyone pick up the Harry/David mentions “Gryffindor” in his first reply to Courtney when she hadn’t!5 mentioned which house she was in in her first letter to him? (I’m only on Ch11 so maybe it comes out later)

been searching for this a long time

Ok that make more since she was a Dursley, but it is Dudley who was her father. What Harry aka David did to that family is justified when he bought the company.

I said in a comment on chapter 2 Harry aka David should buy Grunnings. It looks like he did eventually buy stock in the company. Typical Dursley to have another child and she ends up with Magic.

I wanted a story about a syco harry not an emotional distant parent story this hits way to close to home

Ya casi voy por el final y la muerte de la esposa es... una casada, no tiene sentido, y si, se cual es el sentido que pretende, pero no deja de ser una casada que podría haberse cumplido de muchas otras maneras más que darme más sufrimiento a Harry

Estoy leyendo el capítulo 6 y ODIO como hablan de Harry como si todo estuviera bien, como si nada hubiera pasado. Lo estoy leyendo por curiosidad, pero honestamente no merecen ni una sola mirada de reojo

What doesn't make sense is the lack of retribution
Also, they were to leave him alone. That should include his family. Many people should have already suffered.

Sometimes when you have the simplest of prompts is where you find the best fics, hiding in plain sight. Love this so much, thanks for writing