Reviews for Broken Jack Frost |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Take your time we'll be right here for you! |
![]() ![]() I sincerely hope you continue I loved that first chapter |
![]() ![]() Take your time there's no hurry |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good start, but... Use capital letters on names (All names every time you use them) Also remember (even though there isn't any speech here) Place different speakers on different lines |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Jack! |
![]() ![]() I loved it! Keep up the good work.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Since this is a scenario of Jack being broken, I'm not sure how things will turn out...especially since Jack has a rather bitter encounter with one of the Guardians. (I'm no expert on the 'soul' here, but I think it might be safe to say that when a person has lost all hope, he or she tends to take things rather hard.) *In the movie, it sounds like Jack still had a little hope left...but not it this scenario it sounds like.* (I think that makes things harder for the 'Big 4' when they need help most; when Pitch is causing trouble.) |