Reviews for Broken Jack Frost
Hollydoor chapter 3 . 9/7/2021
Take your time we'll be right here for you!
Guest chapter 2 . 4/12/2020
I sincerely hope you continue I loved that first chapter
Guest chapter 2 . 9/6/2018
Take your time there's no hurry
Aekidna chapter 2 . 7/8/2018
Ugly-Duckling123 chapter 1 . 6/9/2018
Good start, but...

Use capital letters on names (All names every time you use them)

Also remember (even though there isn't any speech here) Place different speakers on different lines
AyameKitsune chapter 1 . 4/27/2018
Poor Jack!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/26/2018
I loved it! Keep up the good work..
GirlFish chapter 1 . 4/26/2018
Since this is a scenario of Jack being broken, I'm not sure how things will turn out...especially since Jack has a rather bitter encounter with one of the Guardians.

(I'm no expert on the 'soul' here, but I think it might be safe to say that when a person has lost all hope, he or she tends to take things rather hard.)

*In the movie, it sounds like Jack still had a little hope left...but not it this scenario it sounds like.* (I think that makes things harder for the 'Big 4' when they need help most; when Pitch is causing trouble.)