Reviews for Khans and Conquerors
Heroic Spectre chapter 2 . 5/9/2018
Well, that sucks for him. Probably.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9/2018
More please, this story is great!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/3/2018
the fe stomps, the end
C0rrupt3dSpy chapter 1 . 4/29/2018
I am not the biggest buff on stellaris but I enjoy your writing. This is a nice intro chapter too.
Heroic Spectre chapter 1 . 4/29/2018
Good to see you writing again. I've never played this game, but this story looks good. Great descriptions as always, and I like a protagonist that's not entirely good or evil. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
ChocolateTeapot chapter 1 . 4/29/2018
Excellent beginning! You do a really good job with the descriptions.

The very formal atmosphere of the ceremony is amazingly described. The speeches are pretty perfect.

The way the Imari’s physicality is presented is also excellent.

I also really like that we get information on more concrete reforms and policies Cari has favoured and implemented than simply “conquer the galaxy”.
apcobe chapter 1 . 4/28/2018
I love that you're entering Stellaris! This story has an amazing start and I love where you are going with it. Tell me, do you intend to try and build a universe here or just like a singular narrative. Also does this happen to be based off of gameplay or just like a pure headcannon sort of situation?
LegendOfPerseus chapter 1 . 4/28/2018
Interesting start, I’ve never played Stellaris but it sounds cool, I’d like to see what you come up with.
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