Its a little unclear where Rose's story is being narrated, and when the perspective switches to her family. Nothing a few enters and some kind of marking can't fix, luckily

You should put the Summer and the others scenes at the very end of the chapter, it really takes deducts from the story where you have their scenes now. It also reads incredibly weirdly. A quick edit will fix that.

Good to see Cinder.

So Ruby saved the Branwen tribe nice.

Good chapter.

I'll follow with interest and i slightly hope Qrow will be Ruby's work.

Not bad

Well now, this is an interesting one... Can't wait to see where you go with it now that Ruby is free to do what she wants. I wonder what she WILL want...

This was a good chapter keep up the good work my friend.

I do actually like this style of writing more than I had originally thought I would. The changing settings and scenes switching between Ruby and Summer without warning could be written clearer and better, but I suppose it is obvious that there has been a scene change every instance that happens... but it IS inconvenient and distracting, taking focus more on the fact that perspective changes than just simply changing perspective, if that makes any sense. I have a feeling that woman Ruby killed will be important in the future. Who was the daughter crying over her? I have a feeling its somebody we know, but since we don't really have any clues to identify the individual I'll just keep it in the back of my mind and not dwell on it too much. And Summer doesn't die! Yay! Overall I liked the chapter a whole lot. Thank you for the early update.

Nice, top notch stuff cant wait for the next chapter.

would it be possible to separate the scenes where the characters are not in the same space.
or is there a reason its written like that

You should at least desperate the parts where it changes from Ruby's perspective to the others, it's just really sudden and out of nowhere.

Dude it's great. For some reason I'm getting a Black Butler vibe. IDK. Anywho great and I'll wait for the next one.

When you switch locations you should really show it.

More description would be good as well.

RE: Bound is bloody awesome needs more love. Best RWBY story I have read

Nice prologue.

I like it! It was a little short, but it IS only an introductory chapter after all. I am quite liking your writing style, but it could use a lot less spaces... but then again, it is a prologue/story preview so I can't really critique it yet without reading some more, and boy do I want to read more! A promising start.