|Reviews for Seven Crystal Shards|
| Darklighteryphon chapter 12 . 9/20
i know a lot of people are going be angry at me for saying this but I'm glad you killed Cynder in this because she kinda deserved it.
Also for your first story this as good.
| IllusionMaster17 chapter 9 . 5/22
The hell? This place is horrible in the most cruel way! Even smells like death and unhope there.
This new dragons seems like strange, but the way they talk, seems a bit weird too, and just left two. Also about Neztal's words about future, relationship and abilties of Cynder, surely will be shocking news... considering how went two chapters ago...
Intrigant chapter, how will end this suffering?
| darklighteryphon chapter 8 . 5/17
Cynder in chapter 7 "I'm sorry Spyro... for everything, I've done... I'll make everything better... I promise..."
Cynder in chapter 8 "Why should I care for that purple boy anyways?"
Well that didn't take long for Cynder too start thinking only of herself again, I mean she's not wrong when she said she's an asshole but you would have thought she would have learned something from Spyro's outburst, but I guess not.
I'm actually glad your show Cynder's actions have consequences and that she is struggling, most Spyro fanfics I've seen don't do this with her so it's nice to see one that does.
also Nice work with the different kinds of dragons and how they all are culturally different.
| IllusionMaster17 chapter 8 . 5/17
I'm beginning to get irrited, being captive of foreigner, a liar, then a test, then... that.
What will come now?
And what with bad treatment to dragons?
PD: Still waiting for reconciliation scene...
| darklighteryphon chapter 6 . 5/15
After see how shallow Cynder is in the fanfic I lost all sympathy for her.
I'm sorry to say this but after seeing Cynder cheat on Spyro like that there is nothing you can do that is going to make me feel sorry for her, In fact I'm only going to keep reading just to see Cynder in pain because at this point she deserves it.
| IllusionMaster17 chapter 7 . 5/16
Now the regret and remorse hit her hard...
Honest, I don't like this about she cheated him, and don't tell him the truth, how could she fix that mistake she did?
And Spyro will be able to forgive her? I hope that happens...
Some tragic chapter, seeing that Spyro already knew it.
This is freaking me out...
| IllusionMaster17 chapter 6 . 5/14
What... the... actual... fing... hell?
| IllusionMaster17 chapter 5 . 5/10
Wait... Ember and Flame are dead!? WHAT!? What insane test... But necesary to stop frightening about the past...
Cynder wanting Spyro to be with her... surely she regrets deep inside what she did to him... just wait until the moment comes.
An itrigant chapter.
| IllusionMaster17 chapter 4 . 5/10
Intrigant how all come until now. But interesting in this odyssey, I hoped Spyro was there for help her, but her fear made her deny that option. Well made chapter.
| Arcantos the Storyteller chapter 1 . 4/30
Two quick pointers.
1. Introduce Characters to us. You just dropped Blayz and Adah on us without any warning, and without letting us know who they are, why they were summoned by the Guardians well... and why their names have the dots on top of the a’s when no over Spyro character has done so before.
2. Pacing. The pacing of this story is a rather swift and reckless. Try to slow yourself down a bit, try and write out the scenes with more flesh to their bones. Give us time to sink our teeth into the descriptions and emotions of your story and its scenes before moving onto the next.