|Reviews for Bound by Trust|
| tur1823 chapter 5 . 6/21
Amazing chapter! I loved all of it. Wasn’t cool for Kate to blow off Max but I loved that scene they did.
The aftercare part was hella sweet and even a little fluffy. Keep writing!
| Grim T Reaper chapter 5 . 6/21
This was hot, very nicely done. Hopefully Kate will be ready for the pain part of her training, though Vicky will be careful i'm sure. :P
| Lyta Halifax chapter 4 . 6/4
So I already liked this chapter in the beta format, but you definitely did a great job "softening" some of the attraction edges. Feels much more natural this go around. And again, I'm really enjoying how "realistic" this is. Trust doesn't happen overnight, especially between two rivals, one of whom hurt the other quite deeply. And that is one of the things I increasingly adore about this, is the emotional interplay and interaction. Knowing that there are going to be mistakes made in the pages to come, because thats what happens in all relationship, despite their nature. :)
Cant wait for more!
| Blackadder261 chapter 3 . 5/29
As much as this isn't normally my side of the fandom to take an interest in... it's not half bad. And the idea of KATE being the Domme. That is a neat touch.
| eri101 chapter 4 . 5/27
I dont know if im risking my account being deleted but im gonna say it anyway
THIS STORY IS MAKING ME WET!
| tur1823 chapter 4 . 5/27
Still loving this story! You have a good eye for detail in your writing and clearly some knowledge of the lifestyle. Keep at it mate!
| Grim T Reaper chapter 4 . 5/27
Another good chapter, i’ve never read that comic before, never even heard of it. This was a very nice way to start kate’s training, and her reactions where very in character, shy Kate is adorable, lol. the only thing missing was vic giving her a gentle hug once they were both naked as a way to help Kate feel more comfortable being naked, oh well, there’s always next time :p
| Lyta Halifax chapter 3 . 5/17
I've been bad about reviewing, so my apologies for this! But I'm really enjoying this! It's nice to see you inspired and enjoying what you are doing, and you've got a great story going on here. Kink and erotica are always nice, but they are best when they are in service to a good story, and I think you definitely have a good, compelling story going on here. Especially in the shadows of the game and the "Sacrifice Bae" ending.
Looking forward to seeing how it goes from here, although honestly I know at least some of it already. But that doesn't mean I can't wait to see HOW it gets there :D
| tur1823 chapter 3 . 5/12
So into this story! Bring on domineering Kate.
| Grim T Reaper chapter 3 . 5/11
Hm, interesting look into kate's mind here, and the sex scene (even though it was all in kate's head) was was a nice surprise, i didn't think she'd jump to it that quickly.
It'll be fun to see how kinky you make these two.
| tur1823 chapter 2 . 4/30
Wow. This is something I look forward to seeing more of. I can’t picture Kate as the dominant type but I really want to now.
Your keen eye for all the BDSM details is surprising also.
| Grim T Reaper chapter 2 . 4/30
This looks promising, and potentially very hot, I never imagined Kate in a domme position, but it could work. It'll be interesting to see how kinky you make these two :P