I dont get it.

Where is the empty thornes?
How was the canon changed?
Where is Bell? The story tagged him AND Ryu as main characters but Bell isnt there and Ryu was just mentioned in ONE single scene.

Its totally okay, when this story is just about your Isekai oc but then, why do you say, Bell and Ryu are in there?

7 chapters/70.000 words are to much to say: Oh dont worry, they will appears in the next chapter.

Scratch Bell and Ryu from the list and it will works.

There is no adventurers guild the normal guild does everything

Roma is only have half elf and elves don’t have better eyesight than Humans in danmachi.

Reading single pov SI story is always a slog. Author can't definetely manages his rambling and internal monologues and everything came out as redundant garbage. What a chore to read.

This fanfic is really well written, and you probably won't come back to it considering it hasn't been touched in almost 4 years. A really compelling main character, and really good character interactions. If you ever plan on continuing, please take your time and don't rush yourself. Looking forward to any potential updates!

I know it's unlikely, but i do hope you come back to finish this one day. It is probably the best Danmachi fic i've ever had the pleasure of reading.

I think the most interesting thing about the Loki familia is that they were treated as an unobtainable fruit, meaning that since Loki didnt like Hestiax by extension, Bell couldnt even think of getting casual with them, and im ralking about Ais, AND Lefiyaxl, Tione, Tiona, Alicia, Anakitty, all those people. So, I reiterrate, the most interesting think about seeing the Loki familia in fanfics is, how the character will make his first impression. That being sad, the fact that you did a timeskip, skipping that process, was a bit disheartening. Beforehand, u even showed his eloquence when talking to Eina, ao i thought wed see all of that and more in his first days in the familia.

I dont offer leave criticisms in reviews, cause im a writer myself and i get it, but i just wanted to let you know someone thought the timeskip didnt really work.

this is just the opinion of a mere person though, so dont feel down. by the way, you said the first two chapters were too info-dumpy. They were my favorite part.

Starting to get good! Don’t stop here

Owza

Hope he gains the fastest level up!

So he is going ti be second rate? No skills or power boosts.

Hope he has something special…

Hope he joins soon

Second greatest! He should reach for the throne himself.

Truly ,one of the most pathethic attempts of a mc. Please quit writing.