Reviews for There's Two Sides
Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2018
Your title is grammatically incorrect. You think people will read it? I won’t.
SassYNoleS chapter 1 . 5/2/2018
Welcome back sweetheart !

Liking the start of this ..

6 year old Bella is so cute and Edward talking about his Dad's Goomah as a man classic !
Pattsy1994 chapter 1 . 5/2/2018
I just love how children interpret their world, love it. Well written with huge potential. Thank you, can't wait for more.
dc chapter 1 . 5/2/2018
you keep writing this is a good start. enjoyed the story. thanks for your words.
jansails chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
Entertaining to read the perspectives of children!
Carlisle is Gay, or is Edeard presuming Goomah is a male friend?
jansails
MissMartha chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
Wow! What a fantastic start! Can’t wIt for more!
2muchtrouble chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
I loved the children's interpretation of events!
grandmachix chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
So... Bella and Alice are six when they become friends. Edward is seven. His dad is a mobster. Tanya was a bitch even as a kid.
Judy
exclusiverob chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
I really love reading the backstory of Edward and Bella's as small children. Excellent start. Please continue.
LizziePaige chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
What a wonderful start to a story. I love that you’re giving us some background and family information from the POV of young children. Some of their observations are hilarious, and others worrying.
I’m really looking forward to seeing where you take us with this story. :) xx
Lady in Black 22 chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
Do another please.
CoppertopJ chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
Amazing job creating the picture from E & B's point of view.
debslmac chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
Looking forward to more
Taylor9901 chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
I can’t wait for more.
sujari6 chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
Interesting to see how the kids view things.
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