Reviews for Together or separate
ines1808 chapter 1 . 10/16/2018
Ok. Super bad writing dude. Like there where times where i was like 'the fuck is this?'
Mephistofeles chapter 1 . 10/2/2018
yeah, about the 'brothers thing' (and another mistakes) i did 'copy & paste' in 'Google traductor' but i didn't read it so thanks for your review 'guest', i'll try fix it
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2018
The brothers breathed easier, dream or not, had left them exhausted.

I think you mean 'siblings' rather than 'brothers' because Lauren is a girl and 'brothers' is used for siblings that are boys/men.