|Reviews for Carrying His Baby|
| rainbowpuff chapter 18 . 9/8
Interesting story so far, I look forward to reading more
| weregirl21 chapter 18 . 9/7
So glad you updated!
| weregirl21 chapter 17 . 8/26
Love this fanfic! Can't wait to read more
| kassandradierker chapter 17 . 8/26
Great chapter! Glad to have an update!
| kassandradierker chapter 16 . 7/23
You go, girl! Stand up for you and your babies!
| Waterlilly101 chapter 1 . 7/22
Okay all y'all mean asses who said the first chapter is an author's note.
1) it is written wonderfully in 1st person from EYELYNS point of view.
2) It does a great job of foreshadowing. Really tells you what the story is about
3) I believe it is written to be more like a journal entry, as in the main character is writing down her story.
Great story. Hope you update soon. I also hope that the end is something along the lines of Evelyn sitting in a chair, writing the last words of her story in a coffee shop or something, when someone taps on her shoulder and it is her long thought dead love.
| MissBookworm1704 chapter 14 . 6/13
Awww, sweet chapter!
| kassandradierker chapter 14 . 6/13
| Unicornlover10 chapter 10 . 5/15
Please post more
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/11
Love reading this story although I just want to bring something up if no one else has noticed. Chapter 1 seems more like a authors note then prolong. Beginning chapter 2 starts off with Evelyn in the hospital wing without showing or telling the reader how she ended up there. And chapter 3 and 4 are pretty much the same chapter with the exception of the Jodie Abacus quote or whatever at the beginning of chapter 4. Don't know if this was noticed or bought up before now or not. Love this story through. I hope to continue to read more soon.
| Purplestan chapter 1 . 5/11
What you've wrote isn't a prologue its just a authors note. Could you have not just put this at the start of your first chapter because it just makes it seem like you've got more chapters than what you've actually got.
| Maudlin Blase chapter 9 . 5/10
Sooo... I suppose the extreme 'nerves' were a pregnancy symptom? Really fun idea you have here. I wonder where it'll go. Good luck writing~ hope you update soon.
| Apokarli chapter 1 . 5/4
First, i would love to read this story, but there is so much formatting problems it is currently not very readable.