Reviews for Light up the Sky
E.Elliot chapter 38 . 8/7
I fucking love it!xD can't wait to see what will happen!
Guest chapter 38 . 5/6
Nonsense
Guest chapter 33 . 5/6
From the writing to the content its distilled melodrama and stupidity!
Guest chapter 32 . 5/6
Trash mc
Guest chapter 20 . 5/6
Cofusing
ChaoticInscriber chapter 2 . 10/8/2022
Aw, Kurama could have made a friend! Betcha he'd even have graciously allowed Tobirama to take the first dance, if only because there wouldn't be enough recognizable left after a bijuu's first step to aim at reliably.
They could have bonded over comparing notes on Ideas of what they wanted to do to the corpse, see which ones they both liked best and which order would allowed them to do the most before there wasn't enough left to target...

At which point they would be making an effort to do the "most powerful sentient walking mass of chakra and epically and scarily brilliant and badass supernin" equivalent of salting and burning the entire mile radius. Just to make sure they got every last cell and molecule.
rosaurocunanan16 chapter 38 . 1/28/2022
Hmmm...what to say...tbh, I quite like the start of the fic, the comedy was good, the scenes we're good...but, it all went downhill when Naruto's mother has a "illness" that and the fact that from there the story kinda went confusing to an outright mess.

First Naruto got back to nanamori then he's in Italy, it's just too confusing.

Good start with the fic tho, but the rest? It's a confusing mess.
Eragon135790 chapter 38 . 1/15/2022
im gonna count this ff as finished cause there are only like 2 or so chapters missing to the probable end. absolutely loved the ff, one of the if not the best KHR ff i have read to date(i know there is naruto here but it could hvae been a pure KHR ff with some small changes as long as one changed a bit of logic). truly a great work.
Eragon135790 chapter 16 . 1/15/2022
please pleaase dont include Haru, maybe let her get killed because so far everything went well without any setbacks because i absolutely hate her.
Eragon135790 chapter 4 . 1/15/2022
i hope that part about iemitsu now being narutos will be discarded in the future because iemitsu is a shit, no horrible dad and an idiot, more of an idiot than naruto was.
Eragon135790 chapter 2 . 1/15/2022
if he wanted paperwork free he could always just hide in a jungle nsomewhere and only leave to get ramen.
gosha.geraschenko17 chapter 38 . 11/17/2021
Voi, man, will there be a sequel to this? It's just terrible that she was interrupted
Amu4ever chapter 38 . 9/15/2021
Oh my, this story was truly something else. Thanks for sharing!
Amu4ever chapter 9 . 9/12/2021
Oh my, Tsuna is already way older then I thought. Took the adults a while to react.

Also, having Narutos love of orange make sense for a change is really cool. :-)
Amu4ever chapter 1 . 9/12/2021
Wow, that is an awesome end for the chapter. Evil fox right there XD
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