So, is there ever going to be an update?

I love this story

wonderfull and intersting story

Look, i know its faanfiction and all. so not exactly suppose to be realistic. but man, naruto training some random ass kids to be shinobi? genjutsu? hoe the flying fuck is he teaching that when we know hes trash at it? Why would he teach them ninjutsu? he hasnt done it yet but it sounds like he will. Why the flying fuck would he do that? like an actual reason as to why hed give that type of power in a world of non super powered individuals?

it wound be way more believable to train them in hand to hand, a bit of lile hunting and travel and survival skills. but hiw the fuck is he training these civilans shinobi skills? and so fast. it should have taken literal YEARS for them to get the basics of chakra control let alone any type of genjutsu that he has no idea how to use.

look, its a half decent story. but you needed to just train them in some fighting, teamwork and survival/hunting skills until Naruto was actual introduced to the wider world of super powered individuals. Hes a fucking ancient hokage. he should know to do things in moderation until hes got more info.

What exactly is he training them for? nothing. There's no reason hes actually doing it. no danger, no use for the skills in this world, not that he knows of. He didnt learn from the sage of six paths? you know, not to start handing out power and shit willy nilly? fuck me. should just of have a teenage naruto do this. Because a least then i could blame him just being young and dumb. but no.

youve got some skill as a writter, but your story could use a lot of improvment.

I fucking love it!xD can't wait to see what will happen!

Nonsense

From the writing to the content its distilled melodrama and stupidity!

Trash mc

Cofusing

Aw, Kurama could have made a friend! Betcha he'd even have graciously allowed Tobirama to take the first dance, if only because there wouldn't be enough recognizable left after a bijuu's first step to aim at reliably.
They could have bonded over comparing notes on Ideas of what they wanted to do to the corpse, see which ones they both liked best and which order would allowed them to do the most before there wasn't enough left to target...

At which point they would be making an effort to do the "most powerful sentient walking mass of chakra and epically and scarily brilliant and badass supernin" equivalent of salting and burning the entire mile radius. Just to make sure they got every last cell and molecule.

Hmmm...what to say...tbh, I quite like the start of the fic, the comedy was good, the scenes we're good...but, it all went downhill when Naruto's mother has a "illness" that and the fact that from there the story kinda went confusing to an outright mess.

First Naruto got back to nanamori then he's in Italy, it's just too confusing.

Good start with the fic tho, but the rest? It's a confusing mess.

im gonna count this ff as finished cause there are only like 2 or so chapters missing to the probable end. absolutely loved the ff, one of the if not the best KHR ff i have read to date(i know there is naruto here but it could hvae been a pure KHR ff with some small changes as long as one changed a bit of logic). truly a great work.

please pleaase dont include Haru, maybe let her get killed because so far everything went well without any setbacks because i absolutely hate her.

i hope that part about iemitsu now being narutos will be discarded in the future because iemitsu is a shit, no horrible dad and an idiot, more of an idiot than naruto was.

if he wanted paperwork free he could always just hide in a jungle nsomewhere and only leave to get ramen.