Reviews for Plot Bunnies
lolkid chapter 29 . 7/21
jounin is not a level, it is a military rank. Use something else when talking about skill proficiency.
Lexie Starfire chapter 7 . 7/17
What is this one supposed to be crossovered with though
Guest chapter 26 . 7/3
very goof
HiddenDeathStalker chapter 7 . 6/23
Ha! Didn't expect with this. And definitely a cliffhanger. I can only hope that at least there's another chapter there in your mind?
Sakura Lisel chapter 23 . 6/17
Wait how do Naruto and Haruka know their OLD names? They were newborns when they were brought to Firore and found by Maria last chapter and taken to the orphanage. Unless they somehow had something on them that had their old names on it, didn't the orphanage give the, to the orphanage people at least *lol*, NAMELESS newborn babies that were found abandoned brand new names since NOBODY should have known what their old names were?

Even whenever they eventually started talking to Kyubi and Kyubi told them what their REAL names were, what was the names they started out with upon arrival in Fiore that was given to them by the orphanage?
Magic29 chapter 23 . 6/17
Love the reunited family one so far please write more and maybe turn it into it’s own story
Riyan hidayat chapter 1 . 6/15
Guest chapter 21 . 6/10
very good
Guest chapter 20 . 6/7
very good
Wrath Of The Heavens chapter 16 . 6/5
More of these need to be done or at least a similar concept, well done.
I'm probably going to end up stealing this general idea for another story, just so you know.
d.wilson654 chapter 17 . 5/31
this is a great idea
lolkid chapter 17 . 5/31
Either she's an uzumaki or a namikaze, she can't be both. And unless you made the namikaze some dead clan with only her father then namikaze can't be used since her mother belonged to an actual clan.
Guest chapter 13 . 5/25
very good
Guest chapter 12 . 5/24
very good.
lolkid chapter 11 . 5/24
Download isn't the best term for a child to use, specially a child from a primitive society. Place, put, kick/punch into.. Not insert though. Also I can't believe he taught himself to read, specially not Japanese, it is impossible for the same reason hieroglyphs remain without translations.
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