Reviews for Naruto: Shoton of Konoha
Guest chapter 18 . 1/5
Did Naruto forget that TenTen literally said Kakashi's father was Kushina's sensei in this story? How wouldn't Kushina know about Kakashi xD
codywhite162 chapter 75 . 11/12/2024
This story continues to be amazing! Looking forward to what happens next!
StrangestQuark chapter 43 . 11/11/2024
A good story, but I feel like ever since Kushina was introduced we get little to no time with Naruto, like you are trying to do the Wheel of Time style of showing the MC through the perspectives of others. That's a fine writing style, but I feel like it only really works if you have a personal plot for all the others instead of just providing more character growth for everyone then your MC.
oldpotato chapter 40 . 10/29/2024
Well I gave it a read through. I sincerely enjoyed the first 20 chapters. Some of the best I've read in the fandom, especially the chapters regarding the second test.

But since the introduction of more Uzumaki, and more Uzumaki, and more Uzumaki, the story lost it's luster for me. Too many OC's, too many point of views, too many background relationships. It's still a very solid story, don't get me wrong, and by no means is it bad. I actually had to come back here to read another chapter or two just to get rid of the thoughts of an absolutely awful story I just read, but I digress. It's just not for me. I skipped ahead a bit and saw that you put fucking Ganyu in here. While authors are owed a certain amount of creative liberty, as a Genshin player, I can't take this story seriously anymore. Just reading her name makes me think 'Cocomilk' lmao.

Perhaps I'll revisit this story when my reading preference paradigm shifts. I'll bookmark it just in case.
oldpotato chapter 36 . 10/28/2024
Second time someone has excused a person from taking care of Naruto because they were "an emotional wreck". Oh I'm sorry, I guess an 4 year old child being on the streets, being kicked out from the orphanage is fine because all of his potential care-takers were too busy fucking pitying themselves instead of taking the most ingrained of responsibilities of taking care of their own family.
oldpotato chapter 21 . 10/28/2024
You had Kushina react to everyone's fight except her own son's?
oldpotato chapter 16 . 10/28/2024
I absolutely loved this chapter holy shit. That moment between the two boys on Team 7 bonding over memories of Mikoto was heartwarming.

A little confused as to how Sasuke knew about Naruto being a Jinchuriki on the day of their team placing, unless it was the "scroll and kunai" comment, which is a little vague but I guess it could be feasible.
zx20000006 chapter 6 . 10/28/2024
This is bullshit why are you nerfing naruto? Naruto is an uzumaki and a jinchuriki by now he should have chakra levels surpassing kages so how the hell did he run out of chakra so fast and how can haku keep up with him that’s bullshit. Also Naruto’s crystals are way too easy to break they shouldn’t be this weak the main advantage of crystals is that they are hard to break so what is up with this pitiful performance why bother give him the shoton if your going to nerf it like this
HyperA2019 chapter 75 . 10/27/2024
Looking forward to Chapter 76.
zx20000006 chapter 2 . 10/27/2024
I just finished watching a 10 minute video that showed all the shoton bloodline jutsu in the anime and I realized something this bloodline is so freaking versatile and powerful it rivals wood release in my opinion there are two things that naruto can do to make this bloodline even more powerful than canon and surpass the first hokage’s wood style. The first thing that Naruto needs to do is figure out a way to make the crystals much harder to break than in canon beacuse when compared to wood style it is easier to break however since Naruto is an uzumaki and a jinchuriki he has a shit ton of chakra much more than Guren so maybe that factor could be a reason why his crystals are harder to break or in the future he could use sage mode to boost the strength of his bloodline now the second thing that Naruto can do that would make this bloodline absolutely devastating is to figure out a way to channel fuinjutsu into his bloodline like how kushina did with her chains. If Naruto figures out how to do this he would be able to give his shoton jutsu properties they normally wouldn’t have for example he could channel chakra siphoning seals to make his crystals absorb chakra of the enemies or he could channel chakra suppressing seals and paralysis seals that would be able to trap and seal tailed beasts like kushina’s chains and wood release he could also include all kinds of fuinjutsu traps into his crystals from explosive seals to gravity, paralysis, elemental seals and even chakra signal jamming seals and much more if naruto does this along with strengthening his crystals with sage mode shoton would become the ultimate bloodline surpassing the mukoton it would be like an op combination of wood release and adamant sealing chains
Power of Magic chapter 75 . 10/27/2024
It'll be interesting if Danzo and Kazuma have entered into a temporary uneasy alliance and once things are done, they'll fight each other to see who'll rule. Lets hope that things with the humans and demons will eventually get better
14omega chapter 1 . 10/17/2024
Até porque um cara todo de preto numa floresta é bem furtivo mesmo, lol.
Animeworld2.0 chapter 65 . 9/22/2024
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Power of Magic chapter 74 . 9/21/2024
Here's hoping that what's happening in the Land of Rivers will get sorted out, with Kisame and Itachi possibly joining up with them and glad that the Caged Bird Seal is being removed from all the branched members of the Hyuuga. Ah crap, it looks like Danzo is going to destroy what Maiyuri is trying to do and I wouldn't be surprised if he'll send some ROOT assassins to kill her (maybe dressed up as other shinobi in disguise)
Guest chapter 74 . 9/21/2024
Does Danzo have Izumi Uchiha’s mother as a hostage!? Danzo REALLY NEEDS TO DIE!
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