Reviews for Naruto: Shoton of Konoha |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, not a cliff hanger, please update again soon. |
![]() ![]() Great story that may highlight morals in a fight. Story has plenty of action and suspense. Story could use some scenes, really needs to be updated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, it's a lot of different things being added, but not so much that it's overwhelming thus far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like being proven right. Also as a side note, I think Haku would be good with Naruto. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I hate Kya for ripping out Lyn's heart like that. So I will laugh gleefully when it ends up being her lack of giving into her emotions that is preventing her from connecting with nature. To me is isn't about not feeling, but embracing your emotions, all of them and bringing them into harmony. Essentially accepting all of what makes you who you are. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please finish the next chapter soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ngl, I kinda ship Naruto and the princess. Beyond that, the story has been pretty amazing in my opinion. Of course, I could do without the fillers that most Naruto stories have where a woman in Naruto's life tries to control him (seriously, the Ino clothes thing was unnecessary.) I would like to ask a question though. It's about Naruto's reaction towards Tsunade refusing to help at first. I wonder if the thought ran through his mind of back when he was alone and Hiruzen was the only person he trusted, did it mean Danzo could've got to him easily since the Kotoamatsukami was working? I would've loved to see his mind react to the idea alongside the possibility of Hiruzen staying in a coma. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that was quite a chapter, and I look forward to the next one. Glad that the war has finally finished, and it'll be interesting how things will go from here now. It'll be interesting if Kushina and Kotaro will have their fight in the future at all or not, and glad that they all teamed up to kill those demons |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay new chapter, and an emotionally powerful one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Unpredictable like Naruto |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kuroreimei understands the assignment with Kushina lmao |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good writing with Gaara. Ya did my sandy boi justice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HIEN THE MVP |
![]() ![]() ![]() God, hallelujah. that Sasuke isn't all disloyal and shit. I love good guy Sasuke. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welp, I'm crying now. |