Reviews for Longtime Friends- Pokémon- Amourshipping
arata7kasuga chapter 12 . 1/10/2019
Why didn't they just climb into the same bed together again since it's pretty much a routine at this point?
arata7kasuga chapter 10 . 1/10/2019
Whoa! Serena is actually lying to Ash?
arata7kasuga chapter 9 . 1/10/2019
Uhh, What is with Serena? Slapping Ash out of nowhere .-. That is not what I would consider conducive to relaxing or having decent company for that matter. You don't just slap or hit people because you are shocked...or that shouldn't be the case anyways. Is there a reason why your version of Serena is so much more violent and just not her endearingly sweet self?
arata7kasuga chapter 6 . 1/10/2019
I actually rather like how you had Serena admit to really enjoying cuddling Ash, that was a cute moment, especially her 'five more minutes' :) I aweee'd at it. :P
arata7kasuga chapter 5 . 1/10/2019
I love the idea of them going to another summer camp! Although, Serene isn't the human embodiment of desiring to get her own way... She is far, far too sweet to be nearly that selfish right? She is far more likely to sacrifice her own comfort in order to ensure her friends happiness and comfort.
arata7kasuga chapter 2 . 1/10/2019
Doesn't Ash call Delia his mom not mum? Actually, does anyone in the Pokeverse call their parent their mum? Other than that, you have a good setup so far. I am interested in where you take this from here on out.
arata7kasuga chapter 1 . 1/10/2019
It is rather unfortunate that Ash never 'sweeps through' his opponents. :/ That would make for such an interesting story rather than him losing constantly. xD
Guest chapter 3 . 1/6/2019
really like the story so far
keep it up
Ben Walker1 chapter 2 . 12/13/2018
uuhh that was unexpected. Dead Gary. huh
littledipper06 chapter 22 . 10/10/2018
awesome chapter here...

the confession was super awesome i just love it man
littledipper06 chapter 21 . 10/10/2018
fine chapter here...
just love this story
littledipper06 chapter 20 . 10/10/2018
fine chapter here...
littledipper06 chapter 19 . 10/10/2018
amazeing chapter here...
littledipper06 chapter 18 . 10/10/2018
nice chapter here...
littledipper06 chapter 17 . 10/10/2018
awesome chapter again
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