Reviews for Harry Potter and the Unexpected Dogfather
94blake chapter 23 . 8/31
Any chance you’ll come back and finish this one? It’s a great story but as is with the unanswered questions and lack of an ending it felt like a bit of a waste of time to read.
CarolWim chapter 1 . 7/15
I love the story, but what irritates me are those expressions from known figures. All those 'wise' words and expressions say nothing, point to ignorance and taken out of context.

The only thing it does is waste space.

About acknowledging Daphne as more than a 'good friend' took a very long time. So long, that this has also become irritating. But at the very last, we're there. It's about time..
RyMalice chapter 23 . 5/19
Ugh, I get how stories can stall or be abandoned, but not knowing who was after Daphne is gonna bug the hell out of me for a while. So many unanswered questions!
RyMalice chapter 14 . 5/19
Ok, two things stood out for me here. One, why the hell did Harry apologize to Hermione? She was the one in the wrong here. The Fat Lady was way out of line with her behavior and Harry rightfully took her to task. The fact that she "woke up" only after Harry threatened to blast her portrait shows that she was purposely ignoring them and she attempted to hit him twice with her frame. Also, whether Hermione likes it or not, it's just a painting yet she wants Harry to treat it like a real person? Ridiculous! Sure, Harry was a bit short with her but he was justified in my opinion as she was being daft.

Second, you've been fairly consistent with showing your readers various viewpoints and letting us know who the person is...and then you decide to have a crazy, stalker, rapist lusting after Daphne in a very dark moment yet leave us in the dark. Makes for a very anxious reading and we have no idea who it is that is going to go after Daphne. He also seems more competent than Malfoy so there could be a good chance of him succeeding which would absolutely suck.
Markjmcmurray chapter 23 . 5/18
Great story! Is there going to be more of it?
Amethyst2005 chapter 23 . 4/29
Please continue.
Reader chapter 2 . 4/24
Hey lad, this is an incredible story. Whatever you’re doing, and whatever is going on in your life, I sincerely hope you find time to continue slowly but surely this fanfic
Infernalwolf1 chapter 1 . 4/25
please continue
Guest chapter 23 . 2/19
Great story please don’t stop here. I know it takes a lot of time to write but you are great at it. I love your story and the way you tell it!
teaman1 chapter 17 . 2/17
I really like this story. It makes you think about the difference people in the school besides Harry. I can hardly put this story down once I start reading it. You keep intrigued with this story. Keep it up!
teaman1 chapter 8 . 2/13
I just wanted to let you know I like this story. I hope you continue on with each year and even into adult life. Keep it coming!
teaman1 chapter 1 . 2/7
Love the new approach and the way this turn of events are unfolding. I am looking forward to see what to come!
morcheller chapter 23 . 12/2/2022
I'm so sorry to see a story with such great potential seem to be fading away.
I know that it is most difficult to maintain the muse necessary to continue a story of this complexity but, it is a bit like seeing an old friend fade away.
Hoping the best for you and the possible continuation.
LtKettch chapter 23 . 11/23/2022
Great story. I hope you will be able to continue it. If you can’t will you at least reveal Daphane’s stalker?
Vallavarayan chapter 10 . 8/11/2022
The one thing I hate reading, is when authors tell snape that Harry was not just James son. It does not matter if Harry was only James son. Snape does not need to see lily in Harry’s eyes to treat Harry normally.
Too many people have started supporting snape nowz. Forgetting that he was in fact responsible for more of the abuse that Harry went through than even Voldemort- as he gave the prophecy to Voldemort and was even responsible for petunia’s hatred towards magicians woth how he treated her while they were children.

I always wanted an author to have Harry reply back to snape of how snape was his fathers son- a child abusing little minded fool.
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