Gosh this was an enjoyable read. A shame that seems to be as far as it got. Great writing!

Finish this story! I like it...

I hope that this gets a update someday, who knows, your muse might make a comeback. Either way, the fic is pretty good, for how little there is of it at the moment.

Where is chapter three,I want to see how things turn out.

Wow amazing story great job!

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I can only call this... interesting. (Somehow)

i love this story i wish you made more chapters please make more chapters

everyone gets almost raped at the same time? odd but well written...

i would like to see more of this,

do you have all of your fics collected in one place? they seem to be scattered about the internet.

I POKE! I POKE you and it shall be the most ubar POKE that has ever been POKED!

Sinom, your works are missed, as is your writing style. This hilariously crafted little piece of work needs to be continued (along with several other things written by you, I might add.) So this is your mid-summer forth of July poke to get you writing again.

Grrrzzz! I wantz moar!

Ja!

MB

I've read this story a few times and find it really enjoyable. Considering how long it has been since this fic was last updated it is likely that you aren't going to continue it but I hope you do decide to.

I like your version of Nabiki, even if she is significantly different from the manga version. I suppose that it is difficult to write Nabiki as she is portrayed in the manga since it is hard to show her in a positive light given how she is in the manga. As for some example about how she is different Manga Nabiki does not keep her word for example when Principal Kuno hired her she took the money and ran. This version of Nabiki is more curious and has people, the manga version often had no idea what was going on only learning about it from others later or not at all even though it was in her house (for example she learned about Ranma being weak when Happosai weakened him from Tatewaki). The manga version of Nabiki does not loan out money ever, and given the way she is it would be out of character for her to do so, though her collecting debts is believable since she is shown to blackmail people who went on dates with her.

I also like your characterization of Ranma even though he too is fairly different from the manga version. Mainly I find your version to be a lot more open and trusting than he was in the manga. Ranma telling Dr Tofu about his going ons and stuff that had recently happened in particular since that is something Ranma just does not do in the manga a fact that Akane has complained about in the manga more than once.

I LIKED this, quite a bit, especially the possible Ranma-chan/Nabiki/Tofu triangle. The crab contest and the aftermath? Pure gold.

By the way, you ever going to update this? It's good stuff, you know.

Well, continued or not, I'm just going to say that Chrysalides is GOOD and it's got POTENTIAL. Lots of it.

This is going straight to my fave and alert list...

Please write a few more chapter's. I was impressed with what I've read so far and would like you to farther explain how Ranma-chan and Nabiki are going to get together and when will Akane finally come out and tell why she is now afraid of girl's becoming involved with her

Your clearly an excellent writer, and while some of this was perhaps a bit explicit, it is nonetheless very well written. Now if only there were more chapters..

Love the story, update soon!.

I think you're a very talented writer, I was hooked from the first paragraph.

Your story has everything humor, violence, sex(well not really but kinda), betrayal, love, lust.

I literally had to tear myself away from this story to go to work, not going crossed my mind it's almost addictive.

I actually found this story on another site and came hear to see if there were more chapters, when I saw there wasn't I started to write this review to beg you to finish it