|Reviews for They found out!|
| mahsa chapter 1 . 5/16
Her name is BiANca! Not Binaca..
Second, you need to find a BETA-reader so that the flow improves as well as spelling and the use of the right words at the right time...
Other then that, the premise of the story is excellent and I hope you continue, but if you could read through the chapters you post and change the stuff that's wrong it would be a good idea!
| Serenity chapter 1 . 5/10
Besides the grammar, it looks like a cool story idea.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/10
This was a bit weird and you really need to review before posting. There were weird sentences about having death rather than died etc.
| Unformal Sorrelle chapter 2 . 5/7
I like this :D