Reviews for Teeth and Claws |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, got Viper huh? Yeah, setting the magicals on the problem so they don't get toddler-fied seems sensible. The Earth has flames too, serious the system is flawed... Humans have a finite amount of flames compared to the Earth so set up a filtration system that uses the earth as a conduit verses humans seems sensible. Best of luck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I need more chapters, it's urgent, it's a beautiful story that needs to be finished. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story, but please continue it You haven't updated in years |
![]() ![]() ![]() i just finished reading this book and really I can see the image of them becoming toddler then getting help from Black family but I'm sosooo excited now that she have her own elements and really want to know with whom she is going to get bonded after viper, I still ship her with Renato though I don't know he just give me this feeling and I have loved him from the very start but ofc fon is good too but I'm reborn's shipper |
![]() ![]() KEEP WRITING PLZ |
![]() ![]() ![]() A really exciting chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would really like to read more of this very interesting story and recommend it to others. Hopefully new updates can surely be found in the not too far future?. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Please consider to continue, I'd love to read more and if the other will also bond to her sky.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I completely agree with Hemione, it's fascinating! Though that means that the Pacificers do is just gifting a spark to the humans worldwide, in a dormant state, and when they awaken it following a deathly danger, it's up to the person to strengthen it thanks to their will, strength... Otherwise, after the first arcobaleno were created, they would have needed to send all of their flames to the successors, which would have be against the goal of sending them to all humans. I look forward to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Icha Icha, huh... It's not the first time you make a reference to another fandom. Anyway, I'm glad I was right about the Earthlings being Atlanti in your universe. I was pretty sure of it. I'd really like for all of Harry's personalities to fuse (though it pains me to lose Alexis). Skull is honestly too weak, young and trusting. But Alexis, as good in magic as she is, hasn't really experimented with her flames. The best combinaison would no doubt be Alexis/Noir, but otherwise fusing all of them would be good too. I'm afraid they end up risking their mind with so much personas around. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you expanded the magical world. J.K.R. unfortunately only dealt with the British side of things. And yep, looks like Yuni only see the canon timeline's future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, so either I missed a chapter where Edward took Alexis' place or this is an OMAKE (which I believe it is). Anyway, it sure was funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So that b*tch Lal Mirch knew Colonello had stronger flames and so decided to kill them all through sabotage or at least make them go their separate ways so nobody notice she's not the strongest Rain. Actually, Checker Face probably went to see Colonello, but she happened to be here and tried to take his place in the camp. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's incredible seeing Alexis commandering her family and politicking with fellows Lords and friends. Though to be fair, I stopped trying to understand who is who in her family and extended family. To complicated and not worth the headache. Still, a dragon huh? In the wizarding world, dragons aren't really the strongest right? Isn't it the Thunderbird, Nundu or maybe Basilisks (what with their killing gaze). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Clearly, the magicals are much more dangerous and powerful than the flame users. For one magicals were already aware of 'Soul Fire', they just chose not to use mafia thinks themselves specials, but clearly they aren't. By the way, even if I don't like how she dictates the life of her family (though it's normal in wizarding society), Alexis is my favorite personality of Harry. |