Reviews for The Dark Below |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ahahahaha the Naruto reference, love it |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good job autor |
![]() ![]() Wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, so i have noticed this in so many novels that it honestly frustrates me to no end. I dont even know if i can blame you because it ALWAYS happens during mha novels so you doing shouldnt really mean much. You do a great job in telling the story that interests you but as soon as any action comes along, because action happens consistently during MHA stories, its like you forget everything that has happened in the story. Why TF is he still limping? Just the last chapter he mentions that he's going to heal his leg with the eye fluid or whatever. Just the last chapter he could start with a base 2 to 3% of OFA, in this chapter he was using only 1/2% against ojiro, I thought it was because if he uses anymore then the fight would be a blowout. But why is he still using that against iida? Iida is clearly much faster because of his quirk so why doesnt he increase his speed to the same level of iida, but you are saying that half a % is the best he could do? At least explain why the consistency blows in this novel. I come for the action, i think most people who read mha ffs come for tthe action but when you create errors in your work like this for no reason then what's the point. I dont want to read 450,000 words just to finally get to a part in the story where the story may be consistent and good. So goodbye, the novel for the first 20 chapters is meh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What happens to his body when he goes to the alternate dimension? Is it more like his soul goes there or his consciousness? Or is it his actual body? So if he dies, will his body just disappear and then reappear when he's ready to return? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So midoriya has stockholm syndrome. I cant believe i never noticed that! It just finally made sense in this novel, but in practically all mha ffs and even the canon version, deku has stockholm syndrome. Damn, it will be hard to break that, there will be a better chance for bakugo to change than deku changing which sucks. I was wondering why he didnt bother going to the other realm to get healed by the ocular fluid. I guess recovery girl would notice? Like he isnt suppose to heal that fast or something? |
![]() ![]() i just now realized that the whale seen might be symbolic of all might and izuku, which is really, really cool. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It really makes no sense that Izuku is ever actually injured for any period of time when we Know for a fact that he can regenerate/heal any damage even complete obliteration, it might leave a scar which is Very inconsistent when you think about it i.e why did cutting himself leave scars but Izuku stitching his body back together because of Nomu didn't leave any... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im glad i came back to this after a long break. The last 5 chapters really show why being immortal is not something anyone should be subjected to. Thank you for writing this masterpiece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() bloodborne like enemy |
![]() ![]() ![]() izuku is such a bitch man. Does he ever develop into a less annoying character? |
![]() ![]() ![]() really don't like izuku in this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() you mean one for all |
![]() ![]() ![]() After everything they’ve done I would leave the Singer in China for last lmao. They deserve it |