I know you won't see this, but you wrote a great story Rest in peace

I love the story so far. I’m still waiting for the new chapter lol but keep up the good work.

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Team Mordred all the way

To thedreadfull2021
Artoria have higher mana and luck than Karna. Higher magic Resistance and is supported by Avalon

Que buena historia me gusto bastante ojala y la continues

To thedreadfull2021
“even if it was only a while“
not exactly I mean she was going all out and even then she was struggling.
“You forgot about rulers magic resistance and somehow she was inflicted a wound by jack“
State near beginning of story a ruler parameter were weaken also it wasn’t just jack it was myraid amount of poison

I really love your story and I don't want to sound patronizing or anything but I would like to point out a few minor mistakes well let's start. Artoria should not be able to fight Karana as an equal, maybe if it was Arthur then it would have been possible. You made Cú Chulainn seem very weak which on the contrary I would say he could beat saber of black just like Achilles. You seem to have made Medusa pretty weak, in case you are forgetting that she was able to hold off against artoria alter( who is stronger than artoria ) even if it was only a while. You forgot about rulers magic resistance and somehow she was inflicted a wound by jack. Medusa also sees sakura in ruler which I think is highly unlikely because they do not even have a single thing in common.

Now you do not have to improve on these things or anything your story is really good without any of these corrections, I just wanted to point them out.

hope you can continue your fate/Rwby fanfic soon

I just found this story and read all the way thorough it, it is great. Love the way you handled the characters and their interactions and all the great twists and fight scenes. Hope you come back to it someday.

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Berserker best girl

Nice can’t wait for the next one

Here a though wouldnt red/black faction focus on taking out saber/berserker first given their ability. Jeanne will be more careful probably so those two would be target that need to be taken down. Yes targeting weaker servant better idea, but it problem if either saber or bersker or with said weaker servant.

Saber shown avalon and Heracles already kill vlad

Saber doesnt have avalon. Heracles, hydra poison weakness. just saiying.

A small one letter typo"jeane gave deep sign."