Reviews for Apocryphal Variance |
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ol-11jrw chapter 13 . 3/22/2020 In fairness between the red and black faction defeating the blue faction while difficult is far from impossible. Karna if he goes all out is likely strong enough to take all of Heracles lives, probably the only one besides Gilgamesh capable of doing so. Siegfried with his dragon slaying enhancement has the advantage over Arturia. Achilles would be able to defeat Cu Chulain. Chiron vs Archer Emiya unless he uses unlimited blade works I think Chiron would win. Shirou Kotomine defeated Jeanne in canon. While Medea is the strongest mage if Semiramis and Avicebron worked together they might defeat her. I think Spartacus with his noble phantasm would be able to defeat Mordred. While Atalanta is a skilled archer she doesn’t have the combat skills of either Emiya or Chiron so you just need to get close enough to kill her. Could go on and granted the blue faction certainly isn’t going to go down without a fight even if you did have the servants fight each other like this it’s just food for thought. |
anbu31uchiha chapter 14 . 3/18/2020 Next |
ZenoZen chapter 14 . 3/13/2020 i been long gone from the website and when i ccomeback the story is getting update and the new update is pretty good |
ReavesTheReader chapter 14 . 2/13/2020 Ara, Mordred's adorable. How nice. XD |
Guest chapter 13 . 2/7/2020 Are you sure Achilles and Chiron would be bothered by Astolfo there? I mean they ARE Greek... |
Guest chapter 9 . 2/7/2020 Go Hercules! Show them who's boss! |
Guest chapter 7 . 2/7/2020 No Medea! Don't! |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/7/2020 Damnit Shakespeare! |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/7/2020 This is a first for me where Jack and Reika join the Black faction. Props to you. |
cybresamurai chapter 14 . 2/6/2020 It would be interesting if the witch of betrayal and the knight of treachery where to react to each other. |
samuelcaldeira76gmail.com chapter 14 . 2/4/2020 Thanks for the chapter |
Animereader05 chapter 14 . 2/3/2020 This is a really good story and I am enjoying it so far. I especially find blue and red Saber's interaction or lack of as interesting. The relationship is different from what I normally see in fanfiction. I hope you continue this story but 1 question. Where is Seig. |
mellra chapter 14 . 2/2/2020 This is going great so far! Wonder if anyone is going to point out that Jeanne, Artoria, and Mordred all look like they could be triplets? Here's hoping that future chapters will see the rift mending between Mordred and Artoria, as well as Atalanta and Medea. One last hope I have is that everyone's favorite trap Astolfo makes it to the end like in canon. Keep up the awesome work! |
Scout chapter 14 . 1/27/2020 The blue faction duh goofed, they handle the golems no problem, the doves will be the real problem though find it hard to believe servant aren't too focus on them, well it not like their saying their identity or anything. Jeanne was able to notice somewhat. "The other is by using a familiar - creating a pseudo-living being by modifying a small animal or organism. By joining the causal lines between master and familiar, one can share its five senses. This is also considered a basic type of thaumaturgy for most magi. Scanning the grey skies, Ruler noticed innumerable doves looking at her direction. It would seem that they are familiars - but, try as she might, she could not see the light of intelligence in their eyes. Normally, by being granted the hair or blood of a magus, the creature that becomes a familiar gains a degree of intelligence. While it cannot quite speak, its intellect should be quite detectable. Yet they look for all the world like simple doves, though it is unmistakable that they are observing her. Are they being controlled by hypnotic suggestions? That would be quite a roundabout method." - fate apocrypha volume 1 a translation. |
Karna chapter 13 . 1/27/2020 Karna perspective? On why he join shirou I mean his loyalty toward the one who summon him, I'm assuming it went down like what happen in apocrypha. |