Reviews for Apocryphal Variance |
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Xperior chapter 14 . 1/28/2020 Moedred |
Xperior chapter 13 . 1/28/2020 Jebaited |
The Loud Person chapter 14 . 1/27/2020 I just read the story and I love it. It's great to see how the OG servants affected the Apocrypha timeline and how certain servants have a connection with the Black and Red Servants. Like Arturia and Mordred which is obvious, the Greek Servants like, Atalanta, Medea and Heracles who were members of the Argonauts and Chiron being the teacher of Achilles and Heracles. My favourite chapter of this story is when Heracles fought Achilles and Vlad, and smashed the King of Romania. I had flashback of Hulk smashing Loki, but when seeing Heracles do it, it's just freaking awesome. And I would like to see more of Berserker fighting. Like Illya said, "BASAKA WA DARE NI MO MAKENAI SEKAI DE ICHIBAN TSUYOI DAKARA!" |
Guest chapter 14 . 1/22/2020 Slice of life Chapter was nice. It’s great to see how Kairi settles with his now alliance with Ruler and her Faction along with explaining the situation regarding Amakusa. Cool to see Medusa’s thoughts on her fellow servants along with the other defected members of the Red Faction, though it was cute how she caught by Assassin when he pointed out her watching others despite her being blindfolded. Archer making Lancer do all the heavy lifting was funny, when they are not fighting each other, they can be an interesting comedic duo. Atalanta trying to make up for what happened to Medea by doing what she asked is nice and all, and it bit funny how she was jealous the way Medea was feeding Jeanne. But eh guess she has to live with that. Shame we don’t get to see Berserker but that guy can’t really communicate with others aside from just grunting or growling. |
Dxhologram chapter 14 . 1/22/2020 Having seen the latest Fate Grand Order Babylonia episode. It was nice to see Medusa's perspective and how Ruler dreamed of her memory regarding the Route that both Saber and Rider came from. I hope we get to see a big moment from Medusa when she fights. Along with Cu Chulainn. That dog should get the fight of his life that he deserves. |
tsun chapter 14 . 1/22/2020 nice story though as usual, garcher is being smugcher. still nice to see him act in character. |
Pbc98 chapter 14 . 1/21/2020 Pretty good so far, im just waiting for the EMIYA reveal and the confrontation between arturia and mordred |
Fate chapter 14 . 1/18/2020 Everyone wanting an EMIYA reveal, logically he wouldn't reveal, if anything he only tell the partial truth like he Similar to artoria and kojiro conditions as servants. In UBW there was evidence available to rin and saber to put 2 and 2 together Pendant, Rin dreams sequence, and archer saying trace on out aloud. Fate I think they were couple of hint Heaven feel well there was plenty. My point is EMIYA reveal isn't necessary for the story, though it probably going to happen sooner or later. |
guest chapter 14 . 1/18/2020 "yes" rule a small mistype |
Framework chapter 1 . 1/20/2020 Tells Archer he better make a decent meal. Archer's smug face is ready. |
Framework chapter 1 . 1/20/2020 Tells Archer he better make a decent meal. Archer's smug face is ready. |
LuisPerez77 chapter 14 . 1/19/2020 muy buen capitulo :D habra escenas EmiyaxArturia? |
W8W chapter 14 . 1/19/2020 Great chapter. I equally like slice of life and war in this story, in either seating servers have great potential to interact, characters or skills. So Ruler is getting memories dreams. It is surprising (pleasant kind) that she see 5 war instead of life but as a resident of throne that knew real names she already knew most what she would see there. I find it important that Sakura was mentioned. Saving her may be possible with other wishes, Saber want to return to Fate road and Caster want to return to UBW, both can carry message. Diner was hilarious and it was nice to see Rider POV. Caster hate Archer but restrain herself to pranks for sake of victory, very nice touch. Atalanta still penances. I love how Archer is take revenge on Lancer for stabbing him. Ruler is obviously trying to help all servants on her side and so far I would say that she make progress and being more forceful would be counterproductive. Nice touch with Mage Association supporting Blue faction. Like was mentioned it is not like their have other options and there isn't much there can do to help. Nonetheless food supplies are present gift and their may help to discover red faction servants identities(if some are left mystery between battles and Atalanta defection) by explaining what catalyst were used. |
Quathis chapter 14 . 1/18/2020 I look forward to the dream share where Archer's identity are revealed to Ruler. Lots of shock and amazement. They really do dote on their Master like they did in the Grail War, well, most of them do. Mordred actually making friends would make her communications skills rise, which I do believe is a curse of the Pendragon line, or at least those raised by magi. Communicating your feelings clearly should be vital skill for a ruler, and Merlin's ideal of the "Perfect Ruler" lacked that skill, so yeah. Mordred and Arturia could really use a nice heart to heart where they honestly express their feelings. Of course, that could be said of a lot of characters in Fate and beyond. Until next time. |
triscythe59 chapter 14 . 1/18/2020 I just realised that EMIYA and Mordred both have something in common. There both Fakers and they both died on top of hill filled with swords. I wonder what kind of reaction Saber of Red would think if she finds out about that that. |