Reviews for Apocryphal Variance
Shiroyasha Rises chapter 15 . 7/5/2021
It's okay for you be busy. Things are still rather hectic in real life. COVID 19 has not been kind to anyone.

Really looking forward to the OG Servants of the Fifth Grail War kicking some ass. Heracles taking on Karna and Siegfried is definitely awesome. Three of them are endurance fighters, so them fighting with pure skills could take a while. Cu Chulainn finally getting the chance to shine is great. Interesting to see Mordred on the Frontlines with them.

I'm betting Amakusa and Semiramis disappeared to take the Grail during all the chaos. Though Shishigou, Sasaki and Medea are there first and would take the Grail if they do have the time.

Seems like Achilles plans to persuade Atalanta. Let's see how much she values her bond with Medea. Medea did say she would kill her if she senses any betrayal from the Chaste Huntress.

Hope to see EMIYA kick some ass. I thought it was satisfying how he trolled Amakusa and got escaped. If EMIYA sees the opposing Servants he should be able to know who they are by using Structural Analysis on the weapons they wield. Thus learning of their strengths and weaknesses. EMIYA may not be the strongest but he is versatile and pragmatic. He developed a fighting style that allows him to survive against stronger opponents. Like Fate Artoria said, he managed to kill Heracles six times before dying. Wouldn't be surprise if he pulls off another thing that would be deemed impossible by others who consider him to be not much of a threat as his other teammates.
Kensei-1085 chapter 15 . 7/5/2021
I am happy that you are alive and I am happy that you are even able to do your stories.

If Archer EMIYA's identity pops up, I hope Artoria gets to be the first to know, since the Artoria of this story is from the Fate Route, she is a lot closer to Shirou and is romantically involved with him. She did dream his memories after all. So if she ever does see Archer with his hair down and traces Caliburn she would be the first to notice. And if Archer EMIYA traced Caliburn, maybe he and Artoria do the same thing like that of Shirou and Artoria, where they swing Caliburn together to finish off an enemy servant.
Guest chapter 15 . 7/3/2021
OMG I thought this fic was dead and thank god ur still alive kicking author hope for more future updates.
Arctic Fox 322 chapter 15 . 7/5/2021
Iirc Atlanta's bow is a divine weapon so it should be able to get past Achilles's immortality np
sevillabagus chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
Glad to see you still alive, hope you're stay healthy though.
fruitspunchsamurai-987 chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
Well it's nice to hear that you are okay. Just take your time that you need.

Hmm Artoria didn't make an appearance. But since pretty much everyone knows who she is, I guess she doesn't really need Invisible Air to hide Excalibur anymore. But I don't everyone knows the length and width of Excalibur aside from EMIYA, Kojiro and Mordred. So I think it can still be used.

Artoria should be at her very best since not only does she have a Master that is capable of providing magical energy to all of her Servants, she also has Avalon with her. And in the Fate Route, despite being not being able to perform at her best with Shirou as her Master, when she had Avalon, it greatly increase the number of times she could use Excalibur, allowing her to use it 4 times in a row. And now that she has Jeanne as her Master, I think she should be ridiculously strong as she could spam Excalibur more together with Avalon boosting her up. That and the scabbard can heal Artoria from any wound unless her brain is destroyed. Even the wounds sustained by Enuma Elish are healed in a few minutes without consuming any magical energy.

Be pretty awesome to see fight the strongest Servants of the Red and Black Faction. She had those brief fights with Siegfried and Karna, and did pretty well against them despite how it interrupted due to circumstances. Be awesome to see what it would be like for them to go all out at each other.
ocomolinaehain chapter 9 . 7/4/2021
ha! they thought they could defeat *berserker*
Sinner and Redeemer chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
Ohoho, Karna and Siegfried already had their fight with Arturia and thought highly of her. Now let's see how they will fare with Heracles in combat.

I hope we get to see EMIYA starts pulling off other Noble Phantasms like Rho Aias, I hope to see others try to figure out his identity yet get irritated by not knowing who he is. I mean if Cu Chulainn learned that EMIYA used Caladbolg, he would be even more irritated by Archer's mysterious identity as he knows Caladbolg is wielded by Fergus and Archer sure isn't him. Same with Achilles if he saw EMIYA pull out Rho Aias, he would be all like "WHO THE HELL ARE YOU?!", as he knows the shield belongs to Ajax as he fought together with him in the Trojan War.
KimranReech chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
I am very happy that this story is still alive! I really love and enjoy it and hope we will see another update soon!

I am excited to see what Archer is planning and how Casters shenanigans will turn out.
coronadomontes chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
good
MollyPollyRolly chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
Welcome Back! I'm glad this fic got updated
reality deviant chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
i did not expectr this update!
I hope you are well and will stay healthy.
Naruto Sakura Uzumaki chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
Glad to see you still alive! Thanks for the chapter update!
ol-11jrw chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
Good chapter hope to see more Karna vs Heracles
Protector for all chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
Glad to see that you are okay. And it is fine to that your own life is to be your first priority. Best to take care of your own health, especially with the pandemic being ongoing.

I hope Cu Chulainn gets the chance to go all out and be at his best. He really had the short end of the stick, since his original Master Bazett was left for dead thanks to Kirei, and said priest became his master and prevented him from ever getting the chance to fight at his best. Though despite those disadvantages he still manages to be badass in both the Fate and Unlimited Blade Works routes. Fate Route Lancer was able to fight Gilgamesh for half a day. You could chalk that up to Gilgamesh not taking him seriously, but the fact that Cu Chulainn managed to so survive against Gilgamesh for that long showed how impressive he is and that Protection of Arrows is really helpful against projectile attacks. Unlimited Blade Works Cu killed Kirei despite being commanded to kill himself, showed off the skill Battle Continuation.

Heaven's Feel Cu had it the worst, since he died pretty early, thanks to the Shadow and True Assassin, which the latter used his Noble Phantasm to crush Cu's heart. And since this Cu in the story is from Heaven's Feel, I hope he gets the chance to have the good fight and show how badass he is.
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