Reviews for Apocryphal Variance
Panzer0 chapter 1 . 7/4/2021
Ngl I didn't expect this fic to be this enjoyable when I clicked on it after reading the synopsis. Keep it up dud:P
Takedo chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
Wow, you're back. Glad to see it.

And I was wondering why EMIYA didn't launch Caladbolg at the start. They had a team coming in.

Funnily enough, I just finished re-reading the RWBY crossover you had lol.
Dasgun chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
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spartan-140 chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
Glad to know youre still around
The Loud Person chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
Pretty cool to see two Archer Class Servants working together. And really cool to see how Chiron managed to at least deflect their arrows with his own, but not all of it. He may be the superior Bowman of the three, but even he can't handle the two of them by himself.

EMIYA could have nuked the Fortress with Caladbolg, but since Kairi, Kojiro and Medea are underground, he has to refrain from doing that until the Grail is taken.

I do wonder where Arturia, Jeanne and Medusa are.
celian Cogitore chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
Thank you for this new chapter.
Gen2324 chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
It's wonderful to know that you are okay, and it's understandable to have your own life to be the first priority. Better to take care of your health especially since COVID-19 is still going.

I got to say it's really cool to see the OG servants fight against the Apocrypha servants. Especially now that they work together and most of them aren't nerfed by terrible masters and provided less magical energy than they need. They can now perform at their best thanks to Jeanne being their master. Got to admit it was hilarious and awesome how Heracles threw a tree at Karna and Achilles attempted to do the same thing to him, albeit Berserker dodged it. I guess Achilles really wanted to match his senpai. XD

Gonna assume Achilles is attempting persuade Atalanta to go back to his side, I don't think it's going to work however. Atalanta knows Medea far longer than Achilles and has a bond with her fellow Argonaut. And Emiya is probably going to shoot Achilles' heel.
Uday Sra chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
Awesome
SoraZekken chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
I don’t know why but archer team up felt satisfying.

Take yer time writing. :D
Doortolight47 chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
Oh man, it has been awhile. And I am glad to know that you are okay. I thought something happened to you last year. And one of the reviewers said you were dead, which felt rather frightening.

For this chapter, it's nice to see that the Blue Faction is now the one that is attacking. Since the Allied Black and Red Faction attacked them first but failed as they lost Vlad and never managed to kill Jeanne, as she had Medea and Arturia healing her.

Arturia, Jeanne and Medusa didn't make an appearance. Curious what they are doing.

Heracles had managed to shine in chapter 9. Same with Arturia in Chapter 10 when she used Avalon to block Karna's and Siegfried's Noble Phantasm I hope we get to see Cu Chulainn, Medea and Medusa shine.

We have seen in Unlimited Blade Works and Heaven's feel how strong Cu Chulainn and Medusa was without being nerfed respectively. Cu Chulainn was pretty nerfed as he has no geographical boosts from the cultural sphere around Japan, since those of Celtic mythology are not well known in that country. However, if the stage of the Holy Grail War were anywhere but Japan, he would be a shining existence on par with Heracles and King Arthur. And we seen how he easily bested Archer in combat in their second fight. I think he can fight on par with Achilles in terms of combat and skill without the use of Noble Phantasms.

Medusa, she was always nerfed due to having Shinji as a Master, but when she had Sakura as her Master and she really kicked some ass. Hell she was at least able to fight Saber Alter for awhile before Shirou backed her up using Rho Aias to block Excalibur long enough for it's power was going to stop and Medusa used Bellerophon. Her Mystic Eyes of Petrification is pretty dangerous, especially towards those who have Mana rank is C or lower, while those of B rank will be petrified depending on the result of saving throw. Those of A rank will not be petrified, but suffer a rank down on all of their abilities and receive a "heavy pressure".

Medea, proved she was pretty dangerous with her planning despite Kuzuki not being a proper master. And now that she does with Jeanne whose magical energy comes from the Grail, well Dr Romani did say that Medea is considered to be top 5 in the entire world in magecraft skills. Which says a lot from a guy known to be the King of Magecraft. So seeing her in action would be wonderful.
psp reader chapter 15 . 7/4/2021
trap card
Th3F00L chapter 15 . 7/3/2021
thank God i thought you were dead
Dxhologram chapter 15 . 7/3/2021
Oh wow, did not expect the story to update after more than a year of hiatus.

Still though, pretty cool to see that Ruler's Servant along with two Servants of Red attacking the allied Black and Red Faction.

Was hoping to see Achilles vs Cu Chulainn. Though I guess Achilles really wanted to talk to Atalanta. Archer EMIYA is proven to be pragmatic so he might take the opportunity to shoot Achilles at the heel while he is talking.

Medea. Hmm, curious on what she would do to take the Greater Grail.
DBoblivion chapter 15 . 7/3/2021
Thought this story was dead, glad it isn't.
shadyxlr chapter 15 . 7/3/2021
Yay! I've been hoping for a new chapter for a while. I can't wait to see what Medea will do with the grail.
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